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for Humility and Obedience

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person Anonymous
schedule June 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This is such an incredible story!! Please let it not get forgotten and never finished!! She demands satisfaction you know. Only you can deliver that. Please continue!!
person Rhiannon ULlewelyn
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was friggin rediculously sexy!!! Love the chemistry and sensuality between them as well as Hermione just letting go. Snape sure as heck knows what he's doing. Oohhh yesss...
person Rhiannon ULlewelyn
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhh. Love how Hermione lied about not having the session and not enjoying domination. Boy is that a falsie!!! Super sexy with Snape understanding fully the passion he culminated with Hermione and wanting that now . How is he going to work up to ensnare her once again? And will he question her about lying about her attraction for domination? So very much need to read more!! This is incredibly sexy.
person Rhiannon ULlewelyn
schedule April 29, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Eeeep!!! No more chapters!! The link to chaperone #3 shows a blank page but there's a fresh chapter title wetting the apatite. How are things going for this story? It's super sexy and should be continued. Thank you for creating it so far!
person Anon
schedule July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person a
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
why isn't there a third chapter?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Mars
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. Delicious. Please continue!
person emi
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um, is there supposed to be a chapter three? I really like it, please keep writing.
person Snape
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is so hot!

But what\'s up with chapter 3???

If it\'s a joke, it\'s not funny!

We wan\'t a real chapter!!!

Please?