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I am enjoying the story and can\'t wait to read more. I do have one thing to add though and that is you need to space some more to make it easier to read. EG) between people talking and more paragraphs, it\'s kinda hard to read with it all squashed together I kept losing my spot lol. XOXO

Write more!

Well shoot, a dang cliffy. I want wedding! I want more soon please.

Fast getting to the wedding night, but also thoroughly angsty for HG, forced sex is not a nice thing. It will be interesting to see how you handle this. Snape being so much older and with an impatrient nature and structureing no time within the confiens of the ritual. HG is going to simply freak. I can\'t even imagine her functioning at the reception.

Overall, I like how you are handling the adults.

Looking forward to an update soon!

HI! I think you story plost so far is good. Two suggestions 1) longer chapters, 2) more detail either into the characters them selves or their surrounding. I think this is a great first run :) good luck!

Great start for a story. Love the marriage fics. Looking forward to see where this one goes and how you get there. More soon please.

This is good! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!

Good start, I\'m interested to see where you\'re going with this. I did notice a couple of spelling mistakes. It\'s Lucius, not Lucious, and Weasley, not Weasly. Post more soon!