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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was really great, you managed to come up with ways for Harry to communicate, cast spells, and find him a nice boyfriend (even though thisl evl eventually be Harry/Snape which I absolutely love), and Harry\'s personality is written so well. I can\'t add much proper word usage, correct spelling, phrasing, all very nice and used to their best ability. The only thing I might say to think about is longer scenes with interaction to really get a feel of Harry\'s emotions and how he is maturing through living alone, having a steady boyfriend, working for a living, the kind of things normal first out in the world young adults experience. GREAT! GREAT! GREAT! Cannot wait for more, sitting with baited breath here, just keep writing and update soon PLEASE!
Sin.,
Barnners
Sin.,
Barnners
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far! It\'s kinda of sad that Harry\'s forgotten how to speak. It does make for an interesting story though. Keep up the great work!
~Ducky~
~Ducky~
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok The rest was absoluly GREAT!! I LOVE it update very very soon like tommarrow ok?
-Carrie
-Carrie
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June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is an awesome fic so far. Please write more soon.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is really interesting. Not as cliche as most dealing with the subject... and I still wonder if/how Harry will end up with Snape? Or won\'t he? Honestly, I like Jackel quite much.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate Ron. I hate Snape. Let them burn.
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!! Jakel is sooo hot *droool* keep up the writing! ^_^
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this please update soon... Jackel sounds real dishy.
Linis
Linis
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. The mute idea is rather original, and I congratulate you on that. It\'s hard to come up with
original ideas with the sheer amount of fanfiction on the net. I like how protective Jackle is, and how Snape didn\'t
believe that Harry couldn\'t talk. Ron is an ass, but what else is new? I haven\'t trusted him since book four, the little
back-stabber. Anywho, please update soon. I know how hard it is to make this site work, so I shall attempt to be
patient... hehehe. Tootles!
original ideas with the sheer amount of fanfiction on the net. I like how protective Jackle is, and how Snape didn\'t
believe that Harry couldn\'t talk. Ron is an ass, but what else is new? I haven\'t trusted him since book four, the little
back-stabber. Anywho, please update soon. I know how hard it is to make this site work, so I shall attempt to be
patient... hehehe. Tootles!
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good, aside from a few typos. Interesting concept, and good job at keeping Snape in character so far. Keep up the good work.