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by Tatiana

person ChevyBaby
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another cliffhanger *cries* Poor Hermione! Poor Severus! I can\'t wait until Lucius and Bellatrix get what\'s coming to them. Another excellent chapter. Please keep them coming :o)
person Marcella
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your stories for a long time and I have to say that this story is probably one of your best.....its amazing what you are doing with Hermione and Snape.....I find myself wishing that you would update sooner than you do so that I can see what happens next. Tell Monkey Boy that Hermione\'s Revenge is still my favorite and I wish that you two would write together more cause that story was fun.
person Metoo2
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow is this good or what i\'ve seen this idea done but they all sucked this one i actully want to keep reading, keep up the good work and continue updating. Its too bad Albus had to die but hey it makes the story more interesting and hopefully Hermione and Severus will get together soon
person magicalwonder
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I am routing for Severus. Albus has always used people for his own benefit, and keeping people who are not only emotional but psychologically attached is just plain cruel. No matter what you think, it would be accurate to say that after two bite she would be bound to him in away that would ensure that she would feel whatever pain he was going through. She may not be bound to him for life yet, but the tie would be great, to the point where she would probably kill for him. Great story, I await what comes next.

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person lACEY WEASLEY
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THERE WAS ONLY ONE THING WRONG WITH YOUR STORY. IT WAS TOO SHORT.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person Rei
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gah! I can\'t believe you left us hanging there. One thing I didn\'t pick up on: because Severus did not let her in, will he have to start the bonding over again? Or is Hermione \'lost\' to him?
person Eloradanin
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE PLEASE real soon, please say he\'s okay T__T
person magicalwonder
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so not right. But I really enjoy this story. I like the twist. I will wait impatiently for the next chapter.
person ladyevilfaerie
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GGGGGRRRRRR! The suspense is killing me! Awesome story I LOVE IT! When are you going to post the next chapter? *sighs* No I cannot ask that question, writing takes time so I will not rush you. I will wait patiently for the next chapter. The plot and everything is awesome. I love your style! TTFN, SAYOONARA!
person Snapesangel
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pleaseeeeee update soon !!!
Love this story :)