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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not enough smut, but getting much better. If you wanted to get really kinky, you could explore how scent-oriented dogs are. . . . Sorry, not everyone\'s as twisted as me. If you still need a beta, send me a note.
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, longer would be nice. That doesn\'t mean I don\'t absolutely love it so far, though!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. If you keep up the good work you may have a classic on your hands.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really good so far. I am looking forward to reading more. I hope you really update it soon! It was such a let down when I read that chapter 3 was just an authors note. If you ever need a beta I would be happy to do it for you. just email me and let me know.
~ Jaimie ~
~ Jaimie ~
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting intro...look forward to hearing how Hermione\'s place in these plans make her more important than Harry when he\'s right there as well...
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...poor Hermione. There\'s never going to be any smut if her cracked doesdoesn\'t heal soon. Oh no wait. That\'s poor me, not poor her. Oh well. Either way. ;)
I really like that Sirius compared their situations to each other. Sometimes the obvious needs to be said aloud and I think that will hep her connect with him on an emotional level.
As always, looking forward to more.
I really like that Sirius compared their situations to each other. Sometimes the obvious needs to be said aloud and I think that will hep her connect with him on an emotional level.
As always, looking forward to more.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the premise you set up on the first page. I meant to say something about it and tgot got called out of the house - only to come back and find that you\'d posted your first chapter. :) Lovely beginning. Looking forward to more.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not normally a fan of SB/HG stories but this seems like ill ill be very interesting. I hope that you continue with it until the end.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really think this could be a good fic. I hope you keep it up! I like the introduction. A lot of people drag out unimportant events which can be frustrating. Maybe a bit more detail in places would be good but since you know where your going, I think this will turn out well.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am excited for you to continue this. I love SB/HG stories and look forward to another chapter.