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for A New Darkness

by lilysunshine

person The It
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I swear I have read this story so many times I know it by heart. I love this story. Nothing else I read can be as good as this. You gotta continue on with it. Please please please please please. I will love you forever if you do. I love you anyways. :-)

The It
person Jemi
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pops?!?! How great!!! I love how you made everything seem so familial and homey, while still all \"I\'m the big bad, don\'t mess with me or I\'ll A.K. your arse.\" I love the interplay between Draco and Raithos. And I just adored the paternal Voldemort. His more human side was quite fetching. Manipulative Dumbledoor was great, and I just loved your reasons for it. They were truly original. And I have to say, I love what you did with the Weasley\'s. They were a bunch of annoying redheads. Okay, I seem to be using the word love or other such things synonomous with it. I think you see a patter here. It was a great story. You ahve talent and vision and I hope to read lots more from you in ther future.

Jemi
person HecateDeMort
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing, will there be a sequel?

I would love a sequel.

Please

Hecate
person Jagwarakit
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This so needs as sequel! I swear this was the best and most plasable plot line I\'ve ever read and you pulled it off so well that I actually enjoyed it. I was very impressed with how you handled the character\'s personalities and put in the bits and pieces to help move the story along and create tention as well as the points of humor to help release some of the tention before it took away from the story. I liked how you did the ending after thinking about it and taking your arguement that you hand in your little footnote though that wasn\'t my first thought. I must admit that I was quite surprised you ended the story how you did, though, as i said, I can see how and why you did. I had actually expected more. I can only hope that you will consider doing a sequel to this story, perhaps centering around Harry and Draco and them having children. Hope I didn\'t sound pushy with that suggestion because that\'s all it is, a suggestion. Any ways, I\'m rambling. This was a wonderful story and I really hope you keep up the great work.
person Anon
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Reading this story has been a very good experience one that i\'m glad took place. However having said that i would have liked have read the wedding. I feel like i was robbed there. Anyhow, a very good story. If there\'s a sequel, even though i don\'t think that there will be, i would like to read it. Thank you for a very interesting read. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
person Lisa
schedule December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG i absolutly loved your story!! its one of the best ones i have ever read!!! i loved it!! everything , harry being voldemorts son, bumblefuck being the true evil villan. u are absolutly brilliant!! plz continue to right more stories!!!
person War-chan
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow....Just Wow O.O, THAT was one of the best Dark!Harry stroys I have EVER read!!!! Great end, mmm...cake ^_^.
Loved how this stroy just kinda unfolded out in front you, beautifuly writen and ploted.
To make all sence to this stroy is, there is no Good and Evil it is how and when you where born and how your life was made out,
if around hateful people and have no light in your world then most likely you will be just as hateful- even you don't mean to be, it is as I find a fact to life. Please tell me what you might think of this coment, I think we might meet a samler ground,
I'm mostly just wondering if you can put your input on my view ^_^. (Please and Think You's!)

Ja ne
YourBigFan
Miss War-chan
person Angel of Darkness
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Wonderful story! The only thing that I find wrong with it is that you ended it there. I would love to know about the wedding (it sounds very interesting) and how the world adjusts to the change. Other tha that I had found the story wonderful. Please put up another chapter with the wedding.
person Charlie
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. Ur a great writer so please do a prologe line one of harry's and Draco's life after the get married and finish school. Please im begging u writhe more chapters to this excelent story even though u said it was done just keep writing my life depends on more chapters
person aj
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay that was fucking hilarious when you made the reference to star wars never watched the movie but who hasnt heard that line and it does kinda seem like it and all but i love you fic its great i have always loved darkharry fics there the bestest evers well i wanted to review before i forgot so you know go team go!!