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for A New Darkness

by lilysunshine

person shini_angel
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that you did an amazing job with this story. Your plot was well constructed and the way you developed the relationship between Draco and Harry was believable. The dialogue was amusing and intelligent. Very nice job. It\'s a story that I\'ll probably read over and over again.

~ Anakni
person El-Gilliath
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo, me like! I\'m a sucker for evil!Harry, and this is goooood! If you decide to write a sequel to this, be sure that I\'ll read it!
Cheers!
person Kay
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I absolutely love this. I read it all in one sitting. This is your first fanfic? That\'s amazing... I love the concept and ...well, all of it ^_^
person in awe
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
amazing! herm+Ron have needed a kick in the ass for a while dumblefuck too :) love the story to bits and dark harry(Srry Raithos) and draco looked (i think) adorable together in a I\'m-a-big-scary-dark-lord-and-i\'m-gonna-eat-you-all look
person Bella_Morta
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am writing to you now begging and pledding with you to write a sequal to this great piece of work. :) If you do feel so inclined to do so I would be thankful to you if you would e-mail me and tell me of your countined work on this story.


Bella Morta
person Lady X
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww!!! It was SUCH a great fic!! I love it! *gushes on and on along those lines* I must go read somethign else of yours if there is any...
Lady X
ps; loved the cake it sounds all sexy and delicious
person Draeconin
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
In reply to your question at the end of the chapter, the only one that really surprised me was Bella. Not because \'Raithos\' wouldn\'t want to, but because I\'d think she\'d be too valuable to Voldemort. I can seen V being willing to sacrifice someone who had been proven a traitor on at least one occasion. Vernon? Expected it.
person Talium
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an amazing story, i loved it so much
person Caracole
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Becuse I just had to read the whole story straight through I haven\'t been getting so much slepp or been doing anything else than reading your excellent story, so you have to excuse me if my mail dosen\'t make any sence.(English is\'nt my first language) First of all I have to say that I don\'t like Harry Potter, Please don\'t be mad att me. I have all the books and I have read them a few times, but I never have develpoed a liking for him. Partly becuse he\'s to kind and perfect sometimes and partly becuse I just think he\'s anoying. Anyhow, if I haven\'t lost you by now I will continue by saying that I have a diffret opinion now. The main reaso I started to read Harry Potter fanfics was becuse the other stories I follow hadn\'t been updated for awhile. So for once I decided to go against my own rules and see if Harry Potter fics were any good. When I started reading the fanfics I realised that often like the Harry Potter that people write about. I really like the dark fics becuse frankly I think thats more fun to read about, becuse then he is\'nt the golden boy. Then I found your story and got a big positive suprise about how good it was. For once I like your Draco, and I often can\'t stand him. Becuse most of the people writing Harry as the main character often writes him as an spoiled ass. But now he was portraited in a humorus but still powerful way. For twice, You made Harrys journey seem belivible and he\'s smart, sexy and powerful but at the same time sarcastic and real. I also like the relationship between them. Well I got to slepp now, but I hope you got some sence out of this ramble.
person Purple Mist
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOur story kicks ASS!! And I like the fact that you didn\'t use the I\'ve always loved you, but was too afraid to say anything cannon between Harry and Draco in this hard to come by Dark Harry fic. Great job! Seriously, I think there\'s maybe a handful of Dark Harry fics where authors put in a great deal of thought behind their works. You did, so take a bow baby!