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for A New Darkness

by lilysunshine

person Yokubou
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
loved this fic good balance of funnyness, darkness and everything in between ;) :D
person Lathea
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story.
Though you have a proplem with spelling and such... Sometimes it's unreadable..
person Maeda
schedule July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GODS!!! *brush away tears* I don't know which to laugh at overall the witty comments between our boys or the disclaimer's itself!! the plot were interesting as well as the name bumblefuck!~ will remember one for good that will~~ XD Oh yeah, I also love the scene where harry would always kiss Voldie's forehead! it's just so LOVE if i may say so myself!! father/son interection is alway LOVE for me, no matter what!! heh, okay back to review.

anyways, i really love your story but there was only one down factor to it all and it's was the retarded spelling errors. I hope you don't mind me pointing this out to you but I don't mind occasional spelling errors but seriously saying? send the fiction to a beta. I think it would rake in so many drarry fans before you could say..well drarry~ just an oppinion. well overall good work! hope to read another wonderful well crafted fiction like A New Darkness~

cheers,
maeda-chan
person Atira
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD...I LOVED THIS STORY!!!!!
I kept waiting for someone to do a story like this
Perfect!
well almost....not enough bloodshed

BUT AWESOME STORY!!!!!
person Max
schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my fourth time reading your story, and it still stands up. Personally, I think that this and many of the other slash stories are just as good, if not better, than Ms. Rawlings original. Thank you for all your work.
person Damien Mitchels
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story but it really needs to be beta'd
person twichy
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was like woah awsumness to the 10th power squared
person Banner
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That has to be one of the most logical DarkHarry stories I've ever read. His choices all make sense. Well done.
person ShadowLily
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story it was well written and wonderful...thank you for writing it
person Narius
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I like happy endings and this is one of the few stories that didn't leave me dissatisfied like my girlfriend trying to hold back an orgasm to save from screaming out.....well, that's how it feels sometimes with sucky stories.....Thanks, this rocked.