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I have a complaint about chapter 5. I DIDN'T GET ALL OF IT!!!!! Could you possiblely fix this please? I really love the story and would like to read ALL of it.

chapter 15 is missising!

i noticed there is not a chapter 15 it goes from chapter 14 to chapter 16 was it removed or possibly deleted?

Hey this seems like a really great story, but I can't read it here on adultfanfiction, and | really, really really want to read it. is there anyways you can send me the story via e-mail??? if so you can send it to aquarakaiba@yahoo.ca. I only ask because there seems to be a problem with the formating and huge parts of the chapters are missing when I try and read it here :(

I just started reading this story and liked it alot. I thought you might want to know that starting about chapter 15 chunks of text are just gone. I also had two chapters that just suddenly ended in the middle of sentences.

ahm.. hi there!! i'm really fan of yours.. i just loved your story, Which i read a time ago, but it's not up until now that i have the real time to ask you this.. could you please, pretty please give me the authorization needed to translete this awsome story of yours to my birth language, Spanish?... pls! i would really love to do this job and so give the chance to other who doesn't get so well with English to read it too ^^
pls pls pls!!!
sincerely yours
Tamara Black
the lost daughter ( yep my own mary sue xD) in a really forgotten fanfiction, of Sirius O. Black ....

Wow. I love the story.

this was a great fic. i read it before it was completed, but kinda got out of the fandom for awhile. just thought i'd drop a line to let you know that i think it's awesome! and to point out that while you may not own Harry and Draco, you do own Raithos, so...yeah. just yummyness possibilities!!

Hey there,

I'm not sure if you're STILL here or not or EVEN if you'll receive this review..I just WANTED to let you know that, THIS is ONE of MY FAVORITE HP-Darkness story out there..It's one that doesn't have the oh so, 'I'll forgive/forget' storyline that's USED OVER and OVER in the everyday so called "DARK HP" story, which I have to say, ISN'T..

This is a LOVELY OLD story..Its magnificient!!


Take Care!!

i know that this story was written a while ago now, but i just wanted to review and say that i loved it, all of it, especially the downfall of the weasleys.