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for Draco Malfoy & the House of Seraphim

by KaliDiah

person LissaRiddle
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh! tricky tricky woman! now get on with it I wan\'t to know what happens when they get to school! Get to the ggod parts will ya!!!!!*winks*
person Tinkerhell
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay you updated!!!First off Happy Birthday!!!Sorry all you\'ll be geating from is this review T__T anyways another great chappie though I am dissapointed that we missed out on Draco and Blaise\'s \"reunion\" as it were, unless it\'s going to be in the next chapter;) I love Blaise I don\'t really know why seeing as he\'s a completely fanon based character, maybe it\'s because due to one of the first discriptions I ever read of a male Blaise I now always picture him as Kiba from Wolf\'s Rain whom in my opinon is the most delicious bishounen ever created thus providing a completely delicious Blaise to put with the utter perfection that is Draco-by the way what is his middle name?-Malfoy(God bless Fanon)!!! Going completely off on a tangent here but will there be any Blaise/Hermoine/Draco cause lately I\'ve noticed when Draco has Blaise Hermoines usually not far behind and I rather like this ship and as I saw some one note before, sometimes it\'s good to see a little hentai in a story not that I\'m saying anything against slash cause trust me I\'m not I am an abid fan girl! I know this came out of nowhere but I tend to be a very random and flighty person hence the obssesion with Tinkerbell, Thanks by the way!!! I am very intrigued by the Narcissa plot twist it\'d be nice if Draco got his mommy back even if he is already dead.It also now makes sense why Lucius didn\'t wait to bring Narssia into hiding with him.I also like your evil Dumbledore I\'ve read ED once before and it was the squickyiest thing I have ever read which includes not only a cannablism but also a Weiss Kreuz Farfarello/Schu story where Farf did something to a nun that I had to re-read three times to be sure I had read it right before I totally squicked out(she was never going to bear god\'s child again.If you read WK you\'ll undoubtedly understand if you don\'t well just Know that Farf yurns to make God cry) again randomeness I know sorry... anywhoo rather enjoyed the reintroduction of Harry though I am an angst whore,I really Really like your postive strong Neville, He\'s another character I like for god knows what reason,but I do.I enjoy when he\'s givin a strong characterisation and hopefully we\'ll see more of him.Looking out for interaction between the recently dead Malfoy and the Golden Trio espeacially Harry, Smut(in general), and for some reason I\'m anxious to see how Muggle Studies with Prfoessor Summers and the intro of the Sex braclet phenomenon to Hogwarts will go. So there you have it, a long Random and hopefully positive review for the birthday girl hope this makes up for my lack of a presant or at least amuses you. I\'ll be looking out for your next update!!!!!!!
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Soon I hope.
person Tinkerhell
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is Fabulos!!!! I love it!!! Draco is my absolute favorite and I really like all the sneaky little coincidences that tie them all togther. I\'m really looking forwad to when the Golden trio get involved and while I love Blaise/Draco I was wondering if there is going to be any Harry/Draco since they\'re bound togther an all. I\'ve never read an Angel/Spike fic before and have decided I rather like them as well as the Remus/Xander that seems to be developing (or is that just me).Can\'t wait for your next update and more of Draco and Dawn shopping, wouldn\'t it be hilarius if Draco bumped into Hermonie in muggle London in a Claire\'s no less. Anyway I will be in sheer agony untill you update again so please PLEASE please update soon!!!!!!!!
person kazhdu
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story ! The rituals are well made, and everything is believable. You must be the first one to make Dumbledore a not-so-good-after-all man
and I think it\'s bloody brilliant ! After all, originality is the key word to an interesting fanfic, or any story for that matter.
I do wonder though, if any of the girls will be having sex. I personnaly am female, and though I enjoy reading male on male sex, it starts to look as if only
the men have sex and girls hardly think about it. (Except for Harmony, but it went with the whole ceremony and being a vamp thing)
So will there be any male-female sex ? (Or M/F/M or F/F or F/M/F, wathever) I personnaly think that the image of two platinum blond Malfoy vampires fornicating
with a brunette slavic vampire slayer is quite enticing.
Anyway, it was great reading time, and I impatiently await the next chapter !

P.S. Please excuse any grammar, vocabulary or spelling errors you will probably find. English is not my native tongue.
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* You shifty? Never! It is cool that it wont be a Harry/Draco, cause I am kinda sick of H/D, I like H/D, but that doestn mean it doesnt get overdone. You have the only story where I actually like Angel, cause normally I dont. *smiles* I am an avid Buffy/Spike shipper and while I dont like the fact that Buffy went bad/stupid, I also understand that she cant always be good in the stories....I am not one of those people who flame for retarded reasons like that. If I dont like the fact that something in the story goes a way I dont like, (like Harry/Ginny or Harry/Ron - I utterly despise the pairings) I just stop reading the story. I am glad that Harry and the Twins are making an appearance soon. Oh yeah, thank you for explaining the gelly braclet thing cause I didnt know that....and I wear a crapload of the things in lots of different colors...some even mixed colors. The sad thing is my little sister knew...I just never bothered to ask her. She is only four years younger then me....I feel really old now. Anyway I hope you update soon, cant wait to see the next chapter.
person Sailor Black 666
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kool so I am not the only Buffy freak!!!! But I cant believe you know all that stuff about it! Damn I must of been close with my guess on how to kill them! I guess we will have to wait to see one of them died! I cant wait to hear all the things about the jelly bracelets!! I wear those things and I didnt know what you where talking about!!! I cant wait to see more shoping in the next chapter! Would you mind emailing me when you post the next chapter! So I will know it is posted . . . Please!!!!! Hoping you post the next chapter soon!
person Dassani
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(is to lazy/tired to log in sry, it\'s 5AM gimme a break people) Oh oh!! *jumps around excitedly* I like War\'s idea!! *^^* Put Fred and Faith together!! Fred is such a cutie!! And sorry about the not reviewing thingy, it\'s my busy season and my classes are being pains in the hind areas! ^.~* Anywho, good luck with looking up Xan\'s other gender, and I\'d love to see him hook up with Lupin!! Oh, what fun that would be! *^^* You have to update soon, please and thank you!!

Hugs&Serpents\'Kisses ~Dass
person tp
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Lovely to hear from you again. I like this chapter! So fun, it\'s finally shopping time!! Yippee!...ok, moving on. Mrs. Malfoy is trippin me out, very plotty move making her all loving, I can\'t tell if she is for reals or settin something up. Also in that scene, I LOVE snarky Snape! That man has such a capacity for dark/sarcastic humor, and you write him so well. His thoughts through the whole meeting were SO funny. I am now all intrigued about this Draco ritual thingy, evil dark lord leave poor hottie boy lone! Oh, but it makes things so FUN and I love a story with Draco as main character (Potter tends to be WAY too goody-goody and I just wanna upside his head most times, I mean the boy has NO common sense, or a death wish). AND then...SHOPPING! yeah! I\'ve been waiting for this for ages, and I must say it was so worth it, just from the shoty bit I read so far. You rock. I love the D/D friendly snarking conversation, and the pep-talk was just so sweet. Sex bracelets! Oh how I remember my jellies fondly, so eighties. It will be so cool for Draco to start up a wizardized version of a muggle sex game, lol. I am very curious who he gets to help...Also, I so agree that Linkin Park so fits Draco! the lyrics to some of those songs were made for that boy. And having him fix the electronics problem would be kool (oh the plot points possible there). Ok, now that I have yammered on for ever I will go now, still looking forwards to more shopping and an appearance soon by the twins??? Please?!
person EscagirlUK
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Sex bracelets? God, American\'s are sooooo weird! Anyways, wasn\'t that chapter kinda short? Hurry and write more! I want some Harry!