rate_review Reviews

ok i know ive complained a few times now..and ill have to start off saying that there are def parts of your story that i do enjoy...it has a great plot....although do u really have to make everyone gay? i mean cmon why couldnt draco get some female loving..and xander? wuts next? snape and giles? o god im putting ideas into ur head

how in the world is buffy self absorbed...she gave her life to save the world not to mention gave up so much of her life to protect complete strangers

wuts with u and making great characters from buffy and harry potter into just bad people...i mean cmon....dumbledore? ur off ur bird

Gurl, when r u gonna update? Hurry it up! lol

YEAH! UPDATE! Gah! ( That is a fun word.) mad props to you cause it is really, REALLY hard to do a connective chapter. Rolling all the inner stories together is really hard and this chapter is great. Although I have to say that the beginning was a big tease. Shame, shame on you. I am so glad you brought the Lupin/Xander thing up agian. I\'m so excited this is the only story that ever explored that pairing but I think that maybe we need to kind a lovely young girl for Harry too. Maybe a sibling of the slayer. Hint! Hint! Just an idea.

OH! And I have to tell you something that will just give you warm fuzzies for days. I was so taken by your earlier chapters explaining the ritual to becoming part of the Order that I bought a Zambien Emerald ring from Home Shopping Network because it reminded me so much of your story. How\'s that for a compliment! Your story had such an effect on me that I bought expensive jewelry that reminds be of it. That and it was a freaking gorgeous ring. Till your next chapter. ((^^))

*squeals and gives kali a long, hard, steamy kiss* i love you! you updated! you made my YEAR! yay!

Anyway, construtive critism. (well, i\'ll try.) As mentioned before, I love this fic with all my little heart. Lovely. hmm, got this absolutely insane idea from reading this, Severus/Lucius, lots and lots of angst, a loveless marriage, a dearly loved son, more angst.... I gotta start writing. NEE-WAY! I wanted to see more sex, poo. Loved the part with Petunia, and the ring sounds absolutely beautiful. And about Sev, pretty please make him gay. PLEASE! *gets down on her knees and begs* please make my beloved sevvie gay. He just doesn\'t fit with ANY of the girls in the story nor any of those NOT in the story. Come to think of it, he doesn\'t exacly fit with the guys either. Is Wesley single? Wesley/Severus maybe. And now I\'m getting mental images. naughty! The deram-sequence with Cedric was gorgeous. Wow!
logging off now, tons of kisses, coyo.

ps. Maybe Percy? For Severus, I mean.

Woot!! Muse is awesome! *^^* It is so friggin\' cute! A want one... Oh, and who are you planning to pair Harry with? Make it something slashy would you! That\'d make my day, what with the Ron reactions that are bound to come of that!! ^.~* Good luck and update soon!

Hugs&Serpents\'Kisses ~DASSANI

YEAH! New chappie! DAMN AWESOME as always! And yes, it is the same Stephanie who left those 3 reviews! :)

Geez, haven\'t seen my name dropped like THAT in ages. In response (in the order I recall them)...

Snape- MINE!!! Oh wait, for the story... hmmm... I have an idea, but we\'ll have to talk, Miss Kali.

Brownies - Or cheesecake. Or cheesecake brownies. Or brownie cheesecake. Really I\'m not picky.

Draco Aiden Malfoy - not bad, but I have a suggestion for that.

Kali\'s pixel art, books, etc - Seriously folks. I thought I was OCD. Heh, ain\'t got nuttin\' on Kali. She\'s INSANE with the pixels and the details that I have no clue where there all gonna go.

Website- oh, yeah. That. Needs some coding and Kali needs to make some decisions about colors, etc.... Because she\'s a detail whore. Um, I WOULD promise it up by the end of the week, but HBP should arrive on my doorstep sometime Saturday morning, and the ONLY person who should distrub me whilst reading would be Snapie-chan.

Draco as Gemini - to be honest, I said either May 21 or June 4. So, I\'m a bit depressed about THAT. Seriously. But yeah, there was NO question Dearest Draco was a Gemini. I could have told ya\'ll that years ago.

Muse- I LOVE Muse. She\'s cute. I want one of my own. Or Snape. I\'ll take Snape.... And NO, I\'m not fixated.

Kali- While she MAY be deviant, all the good stuff was my idea. I swear. Well, most of it, anyhoo. And another wonderful chapter, Kali Darling.

OMG!! A new chapter, yes!! I lurv this story. I really like the way the romances are going so far, fun and sexy. I SO knew xan and remy were gunna hook it up. They should add some oz goodiness in too, where\'s he at i wonder? i love the xander freak over a female hyena, too great and spot on characterization. draco and blaise are so cute, and the sex it hott. they are such sexy, hot males, i think anyone would want them, what\'s not to like? i like the planning session in the bedroom, and how there was no sex in it, shows the boys can be serious too. they are slytherins after all, it\'s not all just fun and bunnies. unless it\'s the monty python bunny, he rocks. i am super looking forwards to harry getting tips from the slyths on how to manage his cooler half. still looking forwards to the coming action at hoggy-warts school of magic and mayhem. you have any of the other books from the story that you wrote up on a website? and all the talk of a three arc story is driving me nuts! i wanna read it all now. really. here\'s cookies and butterbeer to your muse, so get on writing you wonderful author you.