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for Draco Malfoy & the House of Seraphim

by KaliDiah

person Rob
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say how much I love your fanfiction series. I got hooked on to it by another of your fans and I had to take a peek. Then I took another. And another. And another. Now? Hooked. I do have a couple of questions.

1) Will Connor be featured in this series at all?- I know that of course, that this series takes place in Season Five before Connor ever showed up again, but I was wondering if there might be some Connor in the future. Of course I love Draco and Blaise as well as Spike. But...there's that special place in my heart just for Connor, and I would love to see some more Connor. If not, oh well. I still love it.

2) Is Lindsey playing any part in this series or will he not be making an appearence?

3) Finally, what gave you the inspiration for writing such a great series?


I can't wait to see the next chapter. Thanks for writing this.

~Rob
person Io
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG you updated! How could I have missed such momentous news as this!? I love Xander in this. i mean, really honestly love him. Ive seen a lot done with Xanders hyena, but none have been as cool as this. I cant wait to see what happens when he wakes up. Xanders crush on Remus is too cute. I mean, i totally called it, but its still sweet I guess. I cant WAIT untill you update cause this proves to be suitibly fascinating. Update soon!!
person ladyicondraco
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. I like it. You put just enough humor in to make it awesome but not rediculous. I was hoping for some Spander later and maybe Spike/Xander/Angel. Since you're putting so many other pairings in here. I'm also a huge Draco/Harry fan and saw that you plan to have that in here eventually, yay! I don't usually like really long fics, but this one is really well done. Please update soon. BTW I read from the first one chapter to this one in 2 days if that tells you how much I am enjoying it.
person Loki
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank goddess you're back! I was getting desperate - you know, clawing at the walls and whimpering sort of desperate. But now - ahhhhh, more vampiry goodness. I do like that 'Hunting Basics' lesson the vamps had. It was very...realistic. Way too many authors take the route of having Sires pass knowledge onto their Childer simultaneously as they're turned, which kinda takes the fun out of it. And I am warming (literally!) to the Remus/Xander side of things. Kooky cute. Ooooooh tell me Ripper is going to get some. And from the most unexpected person possible - *ponders ideas*
Anyway, *worships*

~Loki
person ShadowsQueen
schedule January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....must......have....next....chapter....*gasping for air* soon.......


person DarkRhapsody
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved it...and you really need to update really soon me thinks...me need to know how things turn out for everybody...
person Rachel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You up dated, you up dated! Yes! I love you.

and, oh, gods, what happened to Xander?
person tp
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW! New Chappie. (Does happy dance)
Yippee!! I have been wondering what happened to ya. Glas to know it was just my old foe - procrastination - dropping by to bug you. I am often bothered by such, as well as the mentioned lazyness. I am glad you are not abandoning the story ever, and I'll always be waiting for updates (no matter how long they take in coming). My e-mail address is now changed, I'm tpena19@yahoo.com now, not @aol.com, darn aol is too expensive and I'm too poor. Can't wait for the next update. This chapter was a great setup chapter. I am now curious about how everyone will deal with Hamilton and what role he will play for The Wolf, Ram, and Hart. Are they going to be connected to old Moldy Wart and what kind of liason would they send if they were? I liked getting to see ole Giles pull his Ripper out, and it took some serious balls to do so on the new improved Angel. He had some good points as well, but the laugh/shock value of the lewd act, I think, outweighed the negatives (I laughed so hard) so it was a worthy scene. Well, now you have wet my appitite for some hunting lessons. So Damn Cool! Draco and Harm can learn to be real vampires, the question becomes what will they be taught? Use of super senses/strength, how to hide/disappear, travel techniques, the bite, jumping/flying(?), fast healing, how to avoid a poofy death, maybe unique talents will be uncovered? Like thrall, seducer, warrior, seer, etc...that's what I wanna see. Will such talents now be observed in our "new" vamps? I can't wait to find out. Also, Xander may as well join the hunt, he's gunna have to learn to manage many of those same skills emerging in himself, now that he's all joined-up triad boy. But I suppose Rems can help him out too, that'd let them "get to know each other". I found it cute that Remus wanted to take things slow, good for Xander too, since his love life has pretty much sucked up to now. The ritual coming up will be super, I'm sure, since you do such an awesome job with them and always have 'em down cold, even to the small details. I love reading them. Well, looks like I'm all talked out, I leave you with a loud 'YOU ROCK' and as always a request to see the gang at Hogwarts.
tp
person coyo
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw man! I forgot to review the last chapter. bad, bad, bad, coyo!!! *tries to kick herself but fails*

anyway, I loved this chappie as well, and I'm so happy you finally updated it! I'd like to write more but it' two in the morning and I'm barely keeping my eyes open. Anyway, lovely chapter!!

*hugs*
person Ravynsword
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was happy to see an update on this story, it's been a while. Thank you for Ripper!Giles, we don't get to see enough of him!! Also, a beautiful job with the discussion of vampires being connected to everything around them, it works as an explanation of many of the physical abilities they display. Now, if we can just get Ripper!Giles in scenes with Snarky!Snape, I'll be in paradise!! Update soon, please.