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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like what you\'ve done with this challenge. I\'m looking forward to seeing it develop. Keep up the good work!
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOO! YEAH! *punches air* Daddy Sev! Haha, wow... this is great! Is there more to come?
WOO! Looking forward to more!
Ciao,
Fish
WOO! Looking forward to more!
Ciao,
Fish
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now thats just bloody cute!!! I also must compliment you on your choice of story title. It definitely caught my attention. I look forward to reading more.
Happy Writing!
Happy Writing!
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I felt terrible for Jonette. It is so very hard to tell a child that age about death, and you did a great job with her not being able to comprehend. I\'m looking forward to reading more. Severus is going to have to learn some major patience here.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome start. you even made me cry. (in a good way)
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Different. I like this so far. Curious to see how Hermione will fit in with Snape\'s new family. Update asap.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AW! How sweet. That was very, very good and I can\'t wait for more.
~iola_83
~iola_83
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the best response to the Adoption Challenge that I\'ve read. You\'ve done a good job keeping everyone in character and believable. Nice!
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great premise and excellent start to you story
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a very emotionally charged first chapter. i didn\'t know snape had a brother though. was that just a plot device on your part? hehe. not like it matters though. this is really good and i look forward to reading more. i will tell you i\'m a bit upset by the eventual pairing though. i really don\'t think it will be too believable. prove me wrong okay. good luck.