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No Words. Just WOW!

I went YAY! (Really) when I saw that you had posted another fic. I really like this one so far, I can see Snape as a daddy! You\'ve kept him so in charater-even when asking for Hermione\'s help.

sniff sniff~ do I smell a potential romance in the air? :)

Live long and prosper!
Titania

I just ADORE this story! I love how you have made Jonette a smaller version of Hermione. I also like how Severus swallowed his pride and asked her for help. I check this site several times a day just hoping for an update from you. You\'re so nice to give us such long chapters but they aren\'t long enough as far as I\'m concerned. I can\'t wait for the next update.

Excellent story!!!!! Love it. Love Jonette. And I love the Severus/Hermione interaction. Please post again soon!!

Brilliant story so far, looking forward to seeing what happens with Snape, Hermione and Jonette. Good luck :)

I can almost picture Jonette.....this story is so cute....I was hoping that you would of included Hermione and Jonettes\' interaction in this chapter.....it would be interesting to of read of the Gyffindors reaction to Hermione and her \"mini Hermione\" its just so cute......please update soon.

it\'s hard to be critizing and praising at the same time, but that\'s how i feel. i really liked this second chapter. it was very sweet how snape handled the little girl. i liked how he picked her ud cad carried her to hogwarts. i liked how he realized that his teacher\'s tone wouldn\'t be good. i didn\'t like how much he was out of character though. the fact that he got teary eyed as he talked to jonette wasn\'t very believable. not with his background. also, the fact that he hugged her and kissed her was not in line with his personality either. it would have been better if he was very stiff and awkward in his physical contact with jonette. a sweet little girl would bring out his paternal instincts and they should, but in my opinion it would have been slightly more believable if those things had of been worked in over time. let jonette (and later hermione) break him down to that kind of thing. still, you\'re writing is quite good and i look forward to more.

That was really sweet, but sooooo sad. I loved it.
Happy Writing!

-sniffle- I want to cry. That is so sweet. You totally rock the casba at writing, and I can\'t wait for more. :)

AWW! That was sad, but beautiful! The poor little sweetie! And poor Snape having to explain that her parents weren\'t coming back... Update again soon!