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person Sandra as Sandra
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and I can\'t wait to read more.
person Anonymous
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
person TobiasX
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update this story.
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so absolutely precious and amusing that I don\'t care if there is sex in it or not! Snape as a Dais jis just hilarious, please update your great work!
person sassafras
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very cool fic with a fun story. The \'you said it had pictures\' bit in chapter 3 was cute! More soon, please
person darthelwig
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooo... I can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with this story! I love your Snape. He\'s so fun! And I think Jonette is just wonderful! Hope you update soon!
person dryade
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it. it\'s so cute.
person Hazel
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THis story is amazing!! please write more asap!!!!!
person spaz141
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet...in a scarey Severus is a dad kind of way. Hermione is going to be great! Thanks.
person rubberduck
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think that was more in character for snape. he was curt and snippy and commanding (in a snarky kind of way), just like we all know and... something (love or hate, take your pick). jonette is a very precocious little girl. she\'s very cute and endearing. i liked all the questions and the banter between snape and her. i found it really funny when she mentioned that she could bend her finger in such a way. that exchange was funny. deranged indeed. however, her reaction to hermione was a bit suspect. would a traumatized little girl really be so forward. in my experience, most children shy away from strangers. they don\'t even wave or say hi when first introduced. i\'ll let it slip though since i really like hermione myself. she\'s a sweetie.