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That was a very enjoyable chapter, I really like your Snape, he\'s still snarky and rude, but
is definately becoming more \"Human\".
Loved the dog and laughed at the Parrot story, my Aunt had one there was many a time I
would have liked to banish it too!
Please update soon,

I\'m sorry, this is going to sound harsh, but I really fucking hate it when people do this. I love this story, I adore it! But it\'s been months since you last posted and now this is up again and its not updated. Do you have an update? I was so excited at having a new chapter, then I see its at the same stopping point.

Well, I was certainly surprised to see this tonight. After a quick reread remembered how much I had enjoyed it and hoped for more. I don\'t know much about 6 year olds but Jonette seems to be able to handle herself when she has too. I\'m glad you allowed her to reunite with her dog - I\'m typing this with one in my lap and the other on my feet - because that will give her another friend besides Hermione and Gunther. It will be fun to watch as Severus and Hermione begin to spend more social time together and how they try to include Jonette in some of that.

Thanks for the feel good read - I NEEDED that!

i do like this story! very well written and it makes me want to read much more!

There isn\'t anything wrong with talking to dogs, I talk to mine all the time I always wonder if they\'ll talk back=)
Hermione is good with Jonette, I think she and Severus will be excellent parents.

Hey, it\'s been four months since you updated this story! Please, where is Chapter 6???

the story gets really confusing.... he is finding a hair detangler and then all the sudden he is talking to someone about taking care of his neice..... something must be missing in there!

What a delightful story! This is the first adoption fic I've read and it was very surprising. Thanks

This is an absolutely wonderful story that you've crafted. Each chapter is beautifully written, but I have to say that this last chapter and the coming together of Severus and Hermione was absolutely the most beautiful, heart-tugging, lovingly crafted that I have ever had the pleasure to read. Please keep up the good work and update soon! I can't wait to see how the story develops!

I am enjoying this story. The lemon in this last chapter was one of the best I've read for a while it was simply written and very believable, not over done and to use an old fashioned word charming. I like Snape/Hermione and children stories, among others ofrse.rse.