AFF Fiction Portal
schedule February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It really is a shame you never finished this, it was so well written and i loved how the characters were acting. Wish you'd update!
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
are you going to finish this? I really like it but I keep forgetting the name so I have to look it up and I wont bother if you don't plan to finish it.
~Sev
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Sampdoria
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please find time to finish this wonderful story. It was so nice to read a well written, romantic, uncomplicated story about HG/SS. With uncomplicated I mean no Voldemort, no Death Eaters, no tragic misunderstandings, just two people getting together. I have enjoyed quite a few of them too, but this one was nice, really nice.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person June W
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Hope all is well with you, the kids, work, real life... Umm, any chance of an update to this great story? Thanks!
person celes
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Write more please! this is unlike anything i've read. Simply fantastic!
person kitty
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please, more!
person Do Wop
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'ve seen worse. I\'ve definately seen worse. This story isn\'t blatently offensive, doesn\'t wander into the realm of the retarded too much, and avoids some standard Bad Fanfic pitfalls.

However, this story doens\'t really have much of a point. It sort of meanders around, accomplishing nothing. And that bit with Snape and Hermione shagging was completely out of place and frankly a little silly.
person kari
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am loving your story. I understand being busy and so am patiently but eagerly awaiting the next chapter. I do wish that there would be more development between Jonette/Snape/Hermione. The last chapter seemed a bit rushed. Your adoption challenge response is one of my favorites. Snape finding his niece is a new trick and find the characters believable in the way they respond to situations and each other. Good job and keep up the good writing.