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for The Scent of Pines

by ladykardasi

schedule October 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was amazingly hot!!!!!!!!!!!!! i loved this and i just can't say enough for how wonderful this is. You portrayed Severus perfectly, cold, calculating but still susceptible to pleasure.
person kunitsu
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was erotically hot. Thats all I can say
person SailorSol
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so, where\'s the next time?

All right, all right, it was beautifully written, and artfully done, and I don\'t know that I\'ve ever seen better.

Happy now?

WHERE\'S THE NEXT TIME?????
person Wolflady
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s REALLY good. You\'ve got how it feels to want to be spanked just perfect. Are we going to get to hear about \"next time\"? (please please please please!!)
I really want the \"next time\"..

Wolfie (also known as Wolflady)
person Aragon_san
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Already read this over at inkstain and instantly loved it - so hot and intense! Great work imo. I can\'t wait to read your continuation.
person Xamphira
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that\'s gorgeous! Absolutely love it... verrrry hot. You\'ve got how it feels to want to be spanked just perfect. Are we going to get to hear about \"next time\" though? (please please please!!)
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