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for Marriage Vows

by selened

person Sabrina
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story. Please keep up the good work.
person Nightqueen
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love This fic!!

I can\'t believe any parent would subject there child to a life of whoring!!! I hope Severus and Albus are able to make sure that their familes never see them again!!!! :-(

As fo the rest wonderfullly written and emotional!! I can\'t wait for Hermione and Severus to have some alone time. That house in wales sounds lovely!! More soon I hope!!!!! :-)

person spaz141
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please forgive me, it has been very hard to review today.

The pregnacy epidemic reminds me of a report I did on the baby boom in Witchata(sp) Kansas after WW2. Interesting idea to tie into the marriage challenge.

Blaise fathering three children in one night...the kid had stamina eh? Too bad about the girls\' parents, it it does kind of make sense.

Its funny how casual Severus is about his wealth, I don\'t think Hermione has any real idea - she sure did marry well given the circumstances.

Thanks, I\'m still enjoying this story.
person Innogen
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I\'m so happy! I got a yummy cookie. Babies babies everywhere. Well...I can see new marriage traditions. Maybe Hogwarts, because of its wards, will become the new fashionable place for Modern Wizarding Bindings! And Couples who want to procreate could come to enjoy the feast...so marriages will in turn become part of a fertility ritual. ::Giggles:: So, I think Hogwarts had better build a nursury and romper room and some daycare professionals for students who get pregnent during a marriage ritual. If they don\'t want to get pregnat, they best not have sex...but of course, the minitry will be hoping they *will* get pregnent (hee hee... what a scheme)....

Great chapter...I wonder if the binding magic made it outside of Hogwarts Wards. After all, Hermione blew the front entrance apart! I love this story. I love that Hermione is an equal and not a child. I love that this is a true marriage and a true partnership--Severus is even including her on Slytherin Head of House duties...that is so awesome. You are writing this in a truly magnificant way. You are writing great character interaction and depth!

Innogen
person ANonnyMouse
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story. Its intreguing and not predictable. I hope L. Malfoy gets it hot, because I don\'t like him, at all.
This is a great story. and Please keep upt the good work. I look forward to reading the next chapters.
person redsugg
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story i can\'t wait to read more i abosolutely love it and i can\'t wait to see what will happen at the trial or what will happen to the three girls. great as usual waiting for the next update can\'t wait lol.

your biggest fan
kristle
person Elbereth
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again! Just to say that these last few chapters are just as great as the first and to wonder how Hogwarts is ever going to cope with the baby boom! Perhaps they will have to build new dormitories?
person GEmory
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story. You keep adding elements that I\'m not expecting, and I very much enjoy being surprised.
person NightQueen
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is in the water at Hogwarts!!! LOL everyone is pregnant!!!!! At this rate the next generations numbers are certainly going to be sky high!! I just finished the last 3 chapters. Just when I think I can\'t love a Fic more you prove me wrong!! The way Hermione defended herself, her husband and their marrige was amazing!! The Ministry should be ashamed of the way they\'ve treated our favorite couple.

The way she took care of him afterwards was so beautiful. Truly a great story!! Can\'t wait to see where you take us next!
person megcoulson
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent! just got done reading chapters 23&24 wonderfully written
update soon?