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for Marriage Vows

by selened

person megcoulson
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter as always..
update when you get the chance
person kelly
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
iv been really enjoying the story. once you have finshed it maybe you should post it over on Lord and Lady Snape. also will you be doing a sequle to the story, i think you should. keep up the good writing later kelly
person ancientgirl
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters. I get the feeling there may be a friendship developing between Draco and Hermione in the future, which would be nice. I like their talking while in bed. It was nice and you could really see them as a real married couple discussing their future plans. I\'m looking forward to the trial. I hope you don\'t let Lucius get away with anything.

person kjsparkles
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After a really horrible day at work, I was so happy to see two new chapters posted. It really made my night. I can\'t wait to read the rest!
person azulkan2
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty heavy stuff the last 2 chapters. Glad Susan came clean and let Severus know it was Blaize. Think the house thing and the aurors is neat. Can\'t wait for the trial. I even feel sorry for Draco. Looking forward to the remainder of the story.
person ancientgirl
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I loved how Ron defended Severus in front of the other student, and I like how Draco seems to be coming around and not being such a little bastard. Thank you for giving us such long chapters. I can\'t wait to read more.
person christy
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is very good, i am happy to see that it is updated almost regularly. The story so far has been wonderful, I like Draco\'s new attitude, is it too late to make Draco Severus\'s son from Olivia, say Lucius stoled from her cause his wife was baron, just asking, seems like an idea to me, make everyone happy.
person GEmory
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, those poor girls. And the ones the potion was meant for are still pregnant. I\'m glad to see Draco appears to have come around and wants to be a good man.
person Raija
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Severus is bit out of character but he obviously has to be in order to the story work...so I like it. I hate out of character fics...usually.
person Innogen
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another chapter! Your story contains both depth and complexity growing with each installment. I\'m curious about how things will go with the \"Baby Scandal\"--Tld jld jld just tell Luna and the Quibbler to write a positive article about it....I think it would be funny if Minerva turned up pregnant too ::grin:: That binding magic must have been a powerful aphrodesiac! It looks like you still have a complicated myster to solve regarding the death of Miss Abbotts real parents...and it\'s nice that Draco seems to be growing up. Also, I find it interesting that Hermione is still going to teach...at least the Slytherins with behave, and Neville will be less nervous so he won\'t melt so many cauldrons :P
--Innogen