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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fell violently ill yesterday, so I finished today. Brilliant story. Thanks for the warning last chapter. I\'m a little disappointed with the epilogue, any plans to write a sequel? So many things are left open and being the polyanna that I am I need resolution. Thanks I enjoyed the read.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I can\'t say much more than that. This chapter was fantastic. I felt sorry for Draco, but I\'m glad he had the support of Hermione and the Abotts. I also get the feeling you are setting things up for a future romance between Draco and Maria. Even though she\'s his aunt, I think the relation is far enough to where maybe they can get together. I\'m glad you didn\'t let Lucius get away with anything after all he had done. I can\'t wait for your next chapter.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter! Too bad Lucious is dying before the rest of the charges can be confirmed though. I can\'t believe this is being wrapped up so fast. Great job! --Innogen
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve really enjoyed the journey you\'ve taken us on with this story. I don\'t want to see it end and I was happy to see in your A/N that you pla planning on some companion stories. Hope to see them posted soon!
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lucius finally gets what\'s coming to him! I feel so sorry for Draco, but glad to see he\'s turned out to be a good young man, protective of his aunt and not wanting to hurt her anymore. Also glad to see how the Abbotts reacted to all of this, still loving Maria and being protective of Draco. Looking forward to the epilogue and any future stories you write. :)
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice ending to a wonderful story!
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Lucius got his just desserts. Good for Draco, now he can be greater than his father ever was. Looking forward to the eppi.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your going to do a sequel right?! About what happens to marria and draco and the preg. girls and severus\'s new job and how everyone reacts to it and the news of malfoy and hermiones baby and what she does after the baby is born! There was so much left unresolved you cant end it here! PLEASE do a sequel! oh and yea i LOVED this story!
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow!....that was....wow! i loved seeing that differnt side of draco. when malfoy grabbed that wand, i was like don\'t kill hermione!
malfoy got what he deserved....
malfoy got what he deserved....
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have read your entire story and I really enjoyed it . I have read most of the other marriage law fics and liked your different twist. I was however very disapointe the the ending.
I wasnt ready for it to end and I want to see how the house goes and all the other things you mentioned them doing. Just a sugestion Make another chaopter or 3 take it through the deliveries. I would really appreciate it I enjoy you writting.
I wasnt ready for it to end and I want to see how the house goes and all the other things you mentioned them doing. Just a sugestion Make another chaopter or 3 take it through the deliveries. I would really appreciate it I enjoy you writting.