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its ok....i guess.....WAY toooo OOC for me tho. u make snape look like a night in shining armor!!!!!

Very OOC...But this was a really good story..

Loved it..... epilogue was a wee disapointing, but you could make it up by telling draco\'s story post- father... ;) Over all i highly enjoyed your story...... ohh one other thing: Ron and Susan, what happened in the end with them?

This was an awsome story! I loved all the plot twist and the back story you had. You are a very gifted writer. I can\'t wait to read your companion to this. I aslo can\'t wait to read your sequal as well. Keep up the wonderful writing.

Tiffany

WHEW!!!! That was one hell of an unexpected bit of information!!!!!!!! I Damn near fell out of my chair!! LMAO! I had to get up and walk around the room for a few minutes! You could have knocked me over with a feather. I so did NOT see that coming. I usually like to think that I am on the ball and can reasonably anticipate how a plot is going to move along and I did suspect the whole Ron interference bit but Severus and Lucius Malfoy LOVERS????? That one blindsided me! * Congratulations * !! You are the very first author to achieve a completely shocked squeal out of me!! You are GOOD!!!! I have loved this story from the moment I began reading it in fact it is about 5:30 am and I have not been able to tear myself away from it. I know there is no way I can go to sleep until I finish it. I also would like to say that I have never seen anything in your stories that would make me think that you need a beta! I hate it when anal retentive morons try to use these reviews to nit pick and stroke their own egos by pointing out any trivial oversight by the author. If they cant enjoy a fantastic story without needing to say something negative then they should not be reading fan fiction. If they expect perfection then they can go and pay for it at a book store! I have read some of your other stories and I have enjoyed all of them very much. * kudos * on an amazing plot twist that left me speechless! ( and that is no small feat as my husband could assure you!) Keep up the great work,
Jaimie

Oh * swoon * This was just so wonderful I can hardly think of how to express myself. I loved every bit of this story. I laughed, I cried, I got some really major shocks and I even let out a squeal of surprise. ( First time ever from reading fan fiction!) This is one of the best stories I have ever read. It was just so well thought through and the plot twists were absolutely amazing to me. Just when I thought things were going to settle down WHAM!! Another shocker. I never saw the Severus/Lucius being lovers part coming and The Maria Abbott twist was a complete surprise ( I had been thinking something totally different there!) The pregnancy epidemic caught me off guard. The potion accident threw me for a loop and Draco\'s change of heart was a welcome surprise too. The death of Narcissa Malfoy and the way Hermione comforted Draco just made my heart melt. I am telling you that I have never experienced so many emotions in one story in my whole life! It was BRILLIANT!! I began reading this yesterday evening and I have read it straight through and it is now 9:30 am and I was completely absorbed in it. I never even went to bed last night! I couldn\'t tear myself away from it! I have read you other stories as well and I have to say I think you are probably one of the best fan fiction writers I have ever come across and I have been reading H.P. fan fiction for a couple of years. You have a rearkable talent and I sincerely hope you keep writing. I will be here to read every last bit of it. * Kudos * This one should be put in the fan fiction hall of fame. I could ( and probably will ) read this again and again. Thank you for writing this and for sharing it with the world. Jaimie

this is going to sound really dumb, but how do you make bacon sandwiches? I am very curious. If you could e-mail me as to how to make them, I would really appreicate that. Thanks.

This was a really great fic. Keep up the good work! I can\'t wait for the sequel.

I loved your stories. I found the Olivia and Severus compainion piece here. I started reading on Lord and Lady Snape and took the hint and looked elsewhere. So I\'m impatient.

I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Thanks!

*sigh* that was a beautiful story. But I suppose that all great things must come to an end. I\'m looking forward to sequel ;)