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by selened

person redsugg
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story i can\'t wait to read more soon please update i love this story and if you need a beta reader please don\'t hesitate to ask ok.

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person Yitzh =
schedule March 16, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Selened, I think I\'ve spooted what Lisa was talking about. You\'re using British spelling conventions. Flavour rather than flavor, ensure rather than insure, in hospital rather than in the hospital.

Lisa, spelling and usage differ between various English-speaking nations and to me it seems appropriate to follow British conventions in a story that is set in Great Britain. You, yourself, would be well advised to take the time and trouble to use upper and lower case letters appropriately. Many people on discussion boards are offended by long posts in \"all-caps\" since it represents SHOUTING.

Selened, a beautiful story.

Yitzhak