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Great new chapters. I love it that you update so quickly. Keep up the good work.

I am not any good at constructive criticism; so all I can tell you is that I am enjoying your story a great deal. It stands out among the other Marriage Law challenge stories for it\'s characterization and it\'s lack of whiny Hermione. I am VERY happy to know that your story is already complete and that I need not fear narrativis interruptis. :) And I really want to know what Lucious wants Hermione for. Just FYI I don\'t think you depicted LM as worked up enough to do an AK in front of a crowd of witnesses; even he would find it difficult to get away with. Thank you for sharing your work. It is apppreciated.

You must update this soon. I like this a lot this far.

Very intriguing chapter. I\'m looking forward to finding out why Lucius is so desperate to get his hands on Hermione. Thanks for the heads up on the other story. I\'ll check it out.

Another very nice chapter. Glad to see Severus and Hermione talking sense into her parents. He\'s really making an effort, and hopefully they know realize that. 32 chapters! Looking forward to it. Also nice to know the story is actually done. So many times I start to get into a story, then the author just stops writing on it. But, I really can\'t complain too much because I can\'ite ite fiction at all.

Another very nice chapter. Glad to see Severus and Hermione talking sense into her parents. He\'s really making an effort, and hopefully they now realize that. 32 chapters! Looking forward to it. Also nice to know the story is actually done. So many times I start to get into a story, then the author just stops writing on it. But, I really can\'t complain too much because I can\'t write fiction at all.

Oops. Sorry about that. The computer said the web site wasn\'t responding so I refreshed, and, oh well.

This is a great story so far. I like how you started them off in civil terms. They trust each other.

Thanks for writing!

I\'ve enjoyed most of the marriage challenge stories, more so when they have different takes on how the couple approach the problem. Yours definitely does that. I don\'t remember reading one before where the couple makes a sensible agreement to try to make this work, and treat each other with complresprespect in private as well as in public. They\'re being open and honest with each other, which may be a bit off canon for Severus, but on the other hand we don\'t really know what he\'s like when he isn\'t acting the part of spy. We can only speculate what he\'s like in private since JKR hasn\'t shown that, and I like your speculation very . GE.

Another very nice chapter. Glad to see Severus and Hermione talking sense into her parents. He\'s really making an effort, and hopefully they now realize that. 32 chapters! Looking forward to it. Also nice to know the story is actually done. So many times I start to get into a story, then the author just stops writing on it. But, I really can\'t complain too much because I can\'t write fiction at all.