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by selened

person GEmory
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely ceremony, and your descriptions are beautiful. BTW, I checked out The Winter Tale and although I would never have picked that pairing, its turned into quite an interesting and lovely love story. Thanks for the heads up.
person Ryn
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really loving this. You see so many of these challenge fics, especially for this particular challenge and this is one of the ones I am eagerly awaiting updates on. I hope to see the next couple of chapters up very very soon. Crossing my fingers they are up when I get home from work at 7 Mountain standard. Pretty please?
person Phantasia
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your story. please keep writing it.
:P
Phantasia
person Sharon
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is turning into a fascinating story; quite unique. Can\'t wait to see where you take the plot. The dynamic between SS and HG is intriguing. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!
person Raija
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes this was great.
person kjsparkles
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. I can\'t wait to see what the Malfoys have planned for Hermione and how Miss Abbott got into Slytherin. Do update soon, please!
person kjsparkles
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So as I was previously reviewing, you posted a new chapter..yea!!! So let me guess.....Maria Abbott is Olivia and Snape\'s daughter? If so, how did she survive? Is Olivia still alive? Enquiring minds want to know...
person Sabrina
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the new chapter. Thanks for updating so quickly. Great work.
person Seshat
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So far I\'m really liking the story. While Snape is very much OOC from canon, you\'ve taken the character in a direction where the OOC-ness is understandable. I like that you took the time to show Snape acting as a Head of House - that\'s something that\'s not often addressed in fanfic so it\'s always interesting to see how people interpret how he\'d act in that capacity.

I like the characterizations of the Grangers, they make sense in the contect of the story.
person Sabrina
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapters. I love it that you update so quickly. Keep up the good work.