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Hey, you snuck an update in without me seeing it! However, now that I\'ve found it let me say, that was excellent!! Not in further in the Abbot mystery, though. I still think she\'s Severus\'s daughter. Although you\'d think that he\'d have noticed the baby missing at the time of the miscarraige. Hmmmm... and Ron, whats up with him?! All jealous and nosy. He\'s going to be a problem later isn\'t he? Can\'t wait to find out.

Very nice. I like how their relationship is developing. Wonder if Miss Abbott is Olivia\'s child, though the age is wrong. Looking forward to finding out.

Love this fic!! From the first chapter you had me hooked. The relationship between Severus and Hermione is unfolding like a beautiful flower!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Delicious Snape-y goodness. Thank you for avoiding the trap of Bastard!Snape and Whiny!Hermione. Rarely do I grin while reading fanfic, but you made my day. I cannot wait to read the rest!!

It\'s me again! Loved the last three chapters. So where do I think the story\'s going? Either Olivia faked her death, and took her daughter to live as a muggle, or she hid the baby somehow before she died. It would be interesting if she were still alive...would Hermione and Severus\'s marriage still be valid? Would Malfoy have a claim then? There are so many possibilities. Do post more soon!!

Great new chapters. I think you are doing a great job on this st Ke Keep up the good work.

Hey great chapters. I just got around to reading them today. By any chance could the little girl be his daughter? Hum. Just wondering.

Phantasia
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Glad to see that most of her friends are being sensible. Also interesting to see how all the practical details are being worked out. It would be awkward for Hermione (and Severus) if they didn\'t think all that through before classes resume.

WOW! I normally skip the marraige contract stories because they are all so very similar, but I couldn\'t find anything else to read so I tried yours.. and WOW! That was a solid hour and a half of reading, I couldn\'t stop! I can\'t figure what Malfoy wants Hermione for, but I\'m almost positive that the little Abbot girl is Severus\'s and Olivia daughter, whom Severus believes to be dead. If thats right will they be discovoring the truth soon? Clearly she was adopted, so will she remain in the custody of the adoptive parents or will Severus demand her return? Poor Hermione, too. Step mom to a fellow student... thats sort of ewww... but excellent story and update more soon!!! Please!

Great story. Love the way Hermione and Severus have come together. Can\'t wait to find out what the heck the Malfoys were up to. And the little girl, who is she? Can\'t wait for more.