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It\'s me again. I know I\'ve already reviewed the last two chapters, but then I read one of the reviews someone esle posted regarding the ages not working out for the Abbott girl to be Severus\'s daughter. So I had to go back and reread the chapter where he talks about Olivia. I think that reviewer was right. Sounds like the girl would need to be Hermiones age or maybe a year or so younger. Six years difference is too much for the time to work out. So my new theroy is... I don\'t have a new theroy yet. But I will. Again, Excellent story! Well written, and with a unique take on what has became a very over done plot! Updates would probably help me with that new theroy thing....

Hmmm... see if the ages were right I\'d still go with her being Olivia\'s daughter. It would explain alot. The muggle baby could have been what Severus had seen with his wifes body. That whole mess is too much though. Olivia would have had to have the baby, switch it and return home to be murdered. She wouldn\'t have done that if she didn\'t know ahead of time that she was about to die. And if she knew why go home? Of course this also would require her to deliberately place the muggle baby in danger by bringing it home with her. I wonder if Narcissa didn\'t have a baby, then switch it in order to prevent Lucius from using her in his evil plans. If he\'d been planning the whole power stealing thing for 11 years that is... She could have brought the muggle baby home and let Lucius assume it was a squib.He\'d probably have killed it. But I don\'t see Narcissa having any guiltps ops over the death of a muggle baby. The girl is too old to be Dracos. Or it could be ok I don\'t have any more could be\'s right now. By the way another great chapter! Can\'t wait to see how this all works out. The curiousity is killing me!

Great story so far i really love it and if you want a beta reader i am still here. I hope that when the story is finished it will have a some what happy ending. Please keep updating i can\'t wait to see what will happen next especially with ron lol. By the way are there any warnings for this story?????????

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I really like your take on the marriage law. And the plot thickens..... I keep wondering if Miss Abbott is perhaps Snape\'s daughter but she would be too young seeing as his marriage to Olivia was when he was 21 which was about 18 years ear, in, in general. Could Miss Abbott be Olivia reincarnate or something? Anyway, I like the story and how you do two or three updates a day which is great. Keep up the good work.

I like the new chapter. I like it that Severus and Hermione are getting closer. Please update soon.

WOW!! Just caught up on the last three chapters!!! What can I say other than, I LOVE THIS FIC!!! Well written, intriguing and the growing emotional ties between Hermione and Severus are truly beautiful to behold. You\'ve done a wonderful job introducing some original characters that I can\'t wait to learn more about!! Fabulous! More soon I hope!! :-)

great new chapter. I love how you are able to dish out the chapters so often. Keep up the good work.

good chapter....okay so now I\'m leaning toward Lucius being the father and whoever the mother was hid her to keep her safe and/or from growing up a pureblood snob destined for servitude to the dark lord. So, I think maybe she could be Draco\'s half sister. At any rate, the child is too young to be Snape\'s and since Olivia was killed when she was only 5 months pregnant, the chances of the baby living if born, eiallially after that kind of trauma, is slim to none. Poor Abbotts -- I wonder who ended up with their real baby or if she is still alive but that\'s another story, LOL.

Hey, I have to way I was wary of starting to read yet another Marraige Law fic, but I like your story. I also love the relationship between Hermione and Snape and I like how you have things flowing nicely. I\'ll be looking for more. Keep up the good work.

Well Ron the prat showed up in this chapter. The others took it well. The whole idea of a fake marriage, well I never thought that. Of course this is a Severus/Hermione fic so........Anyway, this was a great chapter to go with a great story. Looking forward to see how the rest of the school handles the marriage. And what about the little girl? Can\'t wait to find out who she is.
More soon please.