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I never would have thought of that being the case. Intresting turn of events. I cna hardly wait for more. Hopefully yol gel get to pudate before tomorrow, so I can review. I wont get to get on this weekend I will have a house company until Monday . I hope I will have a lot to read. (wink wink)

Phantasia
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I know its part of the challenge, and your idea is a very good idea at that, but awe.d hed he have to get arrested. I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks.

Two new chapters, excellent! I haven\'t actually read the second one yet, I just wanted to arrrg! Now I know who she is, but what happened? You think that Lucius killed his Father? Hmmm

Great story i can\'t wait to see what will happen next i kind of think that it might be severus\' child but how with the age difference i am not show but i can\'t wait to find out.

your biggest fan
kristle

I love it! I never thought I would say that about a severus/hermione pairing either but you pulled it off so well! I can\'t wait to read the next chapter so please update soon! i think you did a great job at keeping him in character ideridering this would NEVER happen in the book and they dont go into his character that much anyway. I can\'t wait to see who the little girls parents are though. I know someone thinks it\'s severus and olivias kid but I dont like that idea so much. *shrugs* but its whatever you decide. just hurry up and post it I\'m DYING of curiosity!

Jesus, Ron is being a real asshole here. I have a feeling he\'s going to do something stupid. Great story so far. And thank you for the speedy updates.

nice story, I really like it! And as for errors, I could only find punctuation errors... I didn\'t find any spelling errors (unless my brain skipped over something I suppose..but usually I\'d pick them out!) and kudos to you for doing this on your own, without a beta reader! I have nothing against beta readers (I think they\'re great and they can be a necessity) but the fact that you can do this without one is really great! It shows that you can be a beta reader to someone else (always a good thing! Nothing liek helping others!) and that you are indeed using edu education ;)
Keep updating qucikly!

I haven\'t noticed any spelling or grammer errors. Of course, my grammer leaves alot to be desired, according to my English Comp. professor anyway, so clearly any mistakes were insignificant. Now back to the important stuff. Another great chapter! Severus never really said yes or no specifically about whether or not it bothered him that his children wouldn\'t be pureblood. He just rambled on about traditions... is that going to be significant? I knew Ron was going to be a problem, but at least noone can say he\'s not in character. I was a bit srprsed at how well everyone else was taking the marriage, but I assume their concern for Hermione over came their dislike of Snape. Pity I have to work ALL day long today, I\'ll not get to see any updates until tomorrow. I did mention that the curiousity was killing me right?

Another excellent chapter! Now what did that book have to say that had everyone sooo uopset?!!! And another step closer to finding out just who Maria Abbott is... ok I\'m ready for another update.

did you ever read the Fionavar Tapestry from Canadian author Guy Gavriel Kay? There is a wizard in it, Loren, who can perform magic by using a source (a volonteer who follows him).