rate_review Reviews

Great new chapters. I feel sorry for Severus and Hermione. You are going great. Keep up the good work.

I can\'t see where you have any obvious errors in the story. In fact, yours is one of the relatively few that I\'ve read without major grammatical or punctuation errors. Many of the un-betaed stories I read on fanfiction sites make my high school English students essays read like the Bard in comparision. Please continue with the wonderful work!

Well, I think Severus was getting ttlettle sappy (sorry I like my Snape sarcastice even when he is being nice); However, that\'s newlyweds for you. I thought the story was losing momentum but this last chapter blasted it back to full speed. Somehow I suspect Ron is stirring things up for Snape.

I really love this fic, I just finished reading to chappie 19 from the start, bit of a long haul but I made it lol, I\'m really enjoying it, your doin a great job I don\'t know how your spittin the chaps out so quick, I\'ve got a bit of writers block at the mom so so I\'m doin my other fav past time and browsing some stories and I\'m glad I click the link for this one I have really enjoyed what you\'ve written so far. XOXO

P.S. YOU SHOULD HAVE WAY MORE REVIEWS THAN THIS, I\'D BE TELLIN ALL THOSE PEOPLE OF WHO JUST READ AND MOVE ON, IT\'S JUST NOT POLITE!

Why do I get the sinking feeling that Ron may have also had something to do with all of this? That healer was a jerk and so were those aurors. I hope this all gets straightened out soon. I hate angsty stuff.

Great story. Hate that Severus has been arrested. Bet money at Ron had a hand in it, the creep! And Marie, glad she is related to Severus. But hate that she is part Malfoy. Really enjoy this story. Looking forward to more soon.
As far as spelling, I haven\'t noticed any. Some stories I read are so bad that it is distracting. Whoever complained, did they cite examples? Or were they just bitching, maybe using their own twisted spelling as a judge?

YOUR STORY IS GOOD BUT IN READING I AM SEEING SEVERAL ERROR IN THE STORY YOU ARE MAKING CARELESS SPELLING MISTAKES AND INCORRECT USE OF WORDS. THIS IS NOT A FLAMER BECAUSE I ACTUALLY LOVE YOUR STORY BUT I WISH YOU WOULD GET A BETA READER WHO WOULD CORRECT THOSE SILLY ERRORS FOR YOU. AS I READ THE OTHER REVIEWS I SAW THAT SOMEONE WAS OFFERING TO BETA READ FOR YOU I CAN\'T REMEMBER THE NAME I THINK IT WAS RED OR OR SOMETHING I THINK YOU SHOULD TAKE UP THERE OFFER AND I HOPE THAT WHEN YOU UPDATE NEXT THEY WON\'T BE SO MANY ERRORS. BUT I DO LOVE YOUR STORY SO REMEMBER THIS IS NOT A FLAMER.

Members of the community are concerned? Ron and/or Draco wouldn\'t be part of that \"community\" would they? Looking forward to finding out, and I hope Hermione gives hell to the Wizagamont but good!

if you\'re a new writer, you\'re doing very well for a first try.