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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ron is an evil little toad! Hopefully this will all be straightened out now and Severus will come home. Excellent chapter!
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a very ucky situation in the Martin family. Ewww. Lucky for Maria she won\'t be acknowleged by them. Glad that Molly wasn\'t shy about telling off Percy and Ron. Personally I can\'t stand Ron and my feelings wouldn\'t be hurt abit if something nasty were to happen to him.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Free Severus! Malfoy can burn in hell (Sometimes I really think I need to get a life - LOL) Thanks I\'m enjoying this story.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! WOW!!!!!!!
I\'ve just caught up on the last four chapters!!!!! I adore this Fic!! I know I\'ve said it before and damnit I\'ll say it again!! Love it!!!!
Chapter 19 had me spitting mad!! How dare they part Severus and Hemoine!!!! I Loved when Hermione rushed to her husbands rescue!! Wonderfuly done!!
Oh, and when they confessed their love!! I melted!!!!!!!!
Ron, don\'t even get me started there he is being a PRAT!!!!!
HERMIONE is head of Slytherin!! Love it even more!! Oh, the possibilities!!!!
This story is Awesome and so are you!! Keep those chapters Coming!!
I\'ve just caught up on the last four chapters!!!!! I adore this Fic!! I know I\'ve said it before and damnit I\'ll say it again!! Love it!!!!
Chapter 19 had me spitting mad!! How dare they part Severus and Hemoine!!!! I Loved when Hermione rushed to her husbands rescue!! Wonderfuly done!!
Oh, and when they confessed their love!! I melted!!!!!!!!
Ron, don\'t even get me started there he is being a PRAT!!!!!
HERMIONE is head of Slytherin!!
This story is Awesome and so are you!! Keep those chapters Coming!!
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve noticed one main problem- identifying speakers of quotes. This happened in the earlier chapters more than in the latest ones, but I\'d recommend fixing that should you choto rto revise it. Some of the conversations were hard to follow. You can also use the identifications to elaborate on *how* the speaker said what they did.
Otherwise, very good job. I\'m really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the next update.
Otherwise, very good job. I\'m really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the next update.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve noticed one main problem- identifying speakers of quotes. This happened in the earlier chapters more than in the latest ones, but I\'d recommend fixing that should you choose to revise it. Some of the conversations were hard to follow. You can also use the identifications to elaborate on *how* the speaker said what they did.
Otherwise, very good job. I\'m really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the next update.
Otherwise, very good job. I\'m really enjoying this fic and looking forward to the next update.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew Ron that little shit had something to do with this. I would have castrated him. Thank you for updating so fast, but I\'m greedy and want more. I\'m wondering if Hermione will tell Severus what Binns did to her? But I think perhaps not since Severus would probably kill the bastard.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m glad the prat confessed; but what a mess he has created! Very much enjoying your story, and looking forward to the next chapter.
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how quickly you update... and I like the story... though, I must admit, even if she was in love with Severus, it\'s very OOC for Hermione to want to shrug off her NEWTs. I like this story so far... please continue soon!
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June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story i can\'t wait to see more updates and i am dying to find out what will happen to severus and i wish you would make hermione give ron a good piece of her mind we all know she has a mean temper lol. I hope that this will eventually have a happy ending.
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kristle
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kristle