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November 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can you fix it up a bit.its a good story
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October 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It serves him right! So glad Hermione was "quick on the draw"
Good chapter.
Good chapter.
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July 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The format sucks. Fix it and then I would truly love to read this story
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April 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You might want to fix this:
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was going to read the full story before commenting however I think that the problem with refering to english mistakes or grammer issues by others is due to the server crash awhile ago. That when the story was re-uploaded that words came out mangled or missing. I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to finish it but perhaps you should scan the story for these errors for example...
The gargoyle at basebase of the -chapter one
The gargoyle at basebase of the -chapter one
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July 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I can't wait for the sequel, so many things left in the air. What the prophecy says? What will Hermione do as a career? What will Draco do with his life? Are Severus and Hermione going to be Maria/Claudia's representatives in the wizarding world? It would be nice if Draco lives with Harry at Grimmuald Place for a while seeing as he is changing over to a Black and Harry is the head of the very small Black family now. Although I am sure you probably already have what you want in mind. I am glad you aren't posting until the sequel is finished, I hate getting half way though an unfinished story to not have it updated. Thank You!
-Witch Myth
-Witch Myth
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June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
for me i agree with what you say about "silly errors" but when downloaded there have obviously been mistaked due to that such as letters being repeated such as odayoday which doesn't make any sense but today its with most of the letters and the sentence. it really rritating for me as a reader but its nothing the authors can do anything about unfortunately. it has occured with several of( the stories which i have read.
cubs (*_*)
cubs (*_*)
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April 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I completely and totally loved this story, right up until the epiloge. It sucked!! What happend to everyone??? You left to many things unfinished and dangling...as for spelling errors, they weren't spelling errors so much as formatting and typing errors...
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The errors I am seeing are, I think, due to computer or transfer errors in the software used by AFF. The storyb is very compelling. I like it very much.
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June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?