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for Friends, With Benefits

by AdmireU

person Rocky235
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Natural dialog, good grammar, and fun to read makes for a happy reviewer. That was a tender story.
person bogus7
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really great. I just discovered this site and I really like it. I was going to skip over this story because I usually don't read "years later" stories, I like plot with my smut. This was a great story and I am glad to have read it, you could write many more stories. Let me know if you do or if you have anything else on anyother websites.
person evilia
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer. Bravo.
person Anima Boko
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now I can honeslty say I have never reviewed a story on this site. But with this one I just couldn\'t help myself..you express something so beautifully...I just dont kow how you do it...but thankyou it was an amazing read.

Do you have anymore fics I could read? email me if you have the time...thankyou again

x
person PhoenixJay27
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey good fic. i enjoyed reading it. nice hot love scene. good job. interesting how you had it go. not something you see very often. keep it up
person a little miffed
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The story itself was decent, but I\'m a bit angry with your portrayal of their relationship. I find it disgusting that they just want to mess around because they\'re horny, but don\'t admit that they are bi, or even in a relationship and cheating on their husbands. It\'s not giving any of us who ARE gay a good name.
person HP Fan
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was entertaining, I enjoyed reading it.