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August 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was very beautifully written and very arousing. Women just know ow to do it better ;)
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's the most beautiful femslash fic I've ever read *_* Compliments!
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful!!!
I\'m glad you dealt with the concern for the marriages in a relaistic way... too many people don\'t add the angst (even if its only a little) They just ignore it and the stories seem rushed. You didn\'t... The story followed a natural feeling progression... and the lesbian sex scene was detailed enough and realistic enough... There are far too few fics that feel so natural in the F/F sex department...
Thank you so much!
and please write more!
~*Artemis*~
I\'m glad you dealt with the concern for the marriages in a relaistic way... too many people don\'t add the angst (even if its only a little) They just ignore it and the stories seem rushed. You didn\'t... The story followed a natural feeling progression... and the lesbian sex scene was detailed enough and realistic enough... There are far too few fics that feel so natural in the F/F sex department...
Thank you so much!
and please write more!
~*Artemis*~
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April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story, enjoyed it very much :o) Was a bit wary of the monologue idea at first but it works really well! Well done!
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January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is just something about this story that I so desperately love. I have read it 4 or 5 times, and I will continue to do so. Thanks so much!
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January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this, good job. :-)
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Natural dialog, good grammar, and fun to read makes for a happy reviewer. That was a tender story.
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October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Natural dialog, good grammar, and fun to read makes for a happy reviewer. That was a tender story.