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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~Stands and applauds like a maniac~
Woo woo. Go Shiv!
Woo woo. Go Shiv!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m always excited when I see you\'ve written something new, because I Kit wit will always be good. My favorite part was the end, Shrikeman deserved that.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just smashing. It was so subtle and sexy. Loved the end where he threatened to poison the jerk again. Really, really great story.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, I rather enjoyed this story. It had a good narrative rhythm to it, nice and even, although if it is \"doomed to be a one-shot\" it would have been nice if the sex scene had been longer. On the other hand, I\'d truly like to see it continued. I think my favorite bit was the few lines just at the end - \"You dear sweet romantic man!\" \'He wasn\'t sure if he wouldn\'t have preferred the three-hour lecture.\'
Good story, all in all, I liked it.
Good story, all in all, I liked it.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snicker* Great job Shiv! Somehow I don\'t think Shrikeman will be a problem anymore!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I imagine Snape sees many ex-pupils; is it her recent matriculation that throws him off (proposition)? This sounds like said-to-be-prude!Hermione, not prude!H, but that\'s perfectly fine. :)
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Forgot, so you get an extra review :P --\"Shrikeman\" as name puts me in mind of those little birds. Happily that\'s the first mental stop, in order, because the second is the monstrous slicing and dicing machine (also called a shrike) in Dan Simmons\' Hyperion, on which the dying of several worlds are spitted, and that\'s far too powerful an image for the potions instructor. :P
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely surprise to wake up to! Funny, cute, all of that. Loved that his romantic sensibilities involved poisoning his sweetheart\'s boss.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning. Could you pack more innuendo into a single first sentence? Probably not. Lovely ending. And the bit in between? Wonderful! I quite like Severus like that; contemplating how to help, being all concerned (aww!) while plotting how to best get into her knickers (definite capture of real life, male behaviour there). Thank you. PS. Have always been a bit anti-Ron, but that picture with him in white socks really threw me off completely. That