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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well writtnd ind intriguing. Thanks. I look forward to reading more as you have time.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m intrigued. I like Hermione best when she is breaking the rules to do what she thinks is right. Such as stealing from Snape\'s stores in CoS. I will be really interested to see where this goes. Also I have read your other story and enjoyed it. I have to say I agree with Draco wholeheartedly. Will there be an update soon.
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. You set an excellent mood and sense of \'place\'. I also like the way you wrote Hermione. I get really tired of seeing her terribly out of character. Great job and I can\'t wait to read more!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is really great. Especially the way you described Hermione\'s reaction the night her parents died and how Snape took her back to Hogwarts. I think that was very nicely written. So, keep going.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i want more! i want more! really, hermione having a 6th sence regarding snape is just too good!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh! hermione over the edge! gotta love that!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this word should be nonexistent rather than inexistent. Other than that, the story is great. I always wondered why Hermione as brilliant as she is never did anything more to avenge her parents deaths. (In fan fiction that is. Haven\'t read the books so don\'t know what\'s cannon.) Very much looking forward to the next chapter to see what Snape has to say about her Knockturn Alley visit.
More soon please.
More soon please.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A good start! A hook to lure me in! There is a difference between criticism and constructive criticism and some people need to criticise just to validate themselves so try not to take it to heart. My motto in life is \"don\'t criticise unless you can do better yourself\" and I can\' bet better so \"you go girl!\" Keep up the good work.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Quite good. I hope you don\'t think it\'s okay to kill faceless and evil Death Eaters will an evil illicit potion that tortures as it kills. I hope Hermione will learn/be shown this at some point too. As long as you update, I will read.