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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like great fun. Look forward to more
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed cha chapters, this one especially. It was really funny, I actually laughed out loud, which doesn\'t happen often.
I really like your style of writing. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
I really like your style of writing. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the first two chapters, its still early so it will be interesting to see where you take it. One gripe I do have is that the chapter could have been longer.....
Minvera chaperoning I look forward to the next developement. One question what about needing to go to the toliet and baths? will thay have to share the bed . Anyway i think its a really good start keep writing and pushing forward with this.
Lots of hugs and support moisie
Aka the one thats attempting to write \"Rose Amongst the Thorns\", and cant comment on spelling or grammer since her own sucks!
Minvera chaperoning
Lots of hugs and support moisie
Aka the one thats attempting to write \"Rose Amongst the Thorns\", and cant comment on spelling or grammer since her own sucks!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Careful, or your face will stick like that.\" I love it!! Thats so funny! I love, too, that they have to have a chaperone. I don\'t mind too much about slow updates, as long as they get there eventually. I\'m reading another story that has breaks of close to 2 months before updates, but I still read it. This wait wasn\'t long at all.
I look forward to the next chapter,
ArienAstera
I look forward to the next chapter,
ArienAstera
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee loved the chapter! Yes it was short but extremally nessesary. The bit about Albus\'s twinkle and chuckling made me laugh so hard what can i say other than this is great!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far! I really like the idea of Dumbledore assigning Minerva as a chaperone. The implication that Snape and Hermione would even need a chaperone is a great way to introduce sexual tension. I\'m looking forward to reading more!
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Leaving a review, leaving a review...
A chaperone, ey? That should be interesting, Severus will be outnumbered by Gryffindors in his own quarters, poor man.
A chaperone, ey? That should be interesting, Severus will be outnumbered by Gryffindors in his own quarters, poor man.
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job on the 2nd chapter here! Glad to see it updated. Keep up the good work, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next! I\'m so glad you didn\'t take too much offense at my vial alert. I beta for several authors, and it just makes me cringe to see it! Wonderful job!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good! update!
*Evil*
*Evil*
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey this ss res really cool, tee hee they are going to drive each itehr mad, my bet is they\'ll kill each other or learn to live with each other by three weeks. Anyways update!