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Great story i can\'t wait to read more i think it is absolutely great and an origial. I have a question for you will either of you get pregnant because no has mentioned any form of bith control so far. I hope you will update very very soon because i love your story. If you need a beta reader i would be more than happy to help.

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kristle

Being a silly, Snape obsessed fan girl myself, I love the premise of this story, and can\'t wait to read more of it! Just thought I\'d let you know. Great job, and so far, I\'ve only made it thru chapter 1.

This story is fantastic! Smutty, yes, but also humourous and VERY well written. Your depiction of Snape is frightfully accurate, and the sex scenes are hot, to say the least. I do hope your friend in the story is not real, otherwise she might be pretty upset that you painted her weak and shy, whilst Snape seems to be quite taken with you. She is almost the fifth wheel here, and I don\'t think Snape would care at all if she left. Anyway, greab. Ab. And I hope you continue on with this.

--Janette

This was absolutely beautiful. Wonderful. It\'s got to be one of my all time favorites. Very funny. Snape riding shotgun. I laughed so hard when he won the prize at Fredrick\'s and now he\'s discovered porn. You do him so well too, perfect. I can\'t believe you only have two reviews. I love it. Great sex scenes too, you incorporated them into the plot very well. Everything flows well and the storyline is great. *applauds* Shelly

I love your writing style, of course, and this is certainly one of the most original Snape/OFC(s?) stories I have read. (Honestly, how many Snape-meets-witch, Snape goes all snarkily googly eyed, Snape-shags-witch stories can one reasonably read?) And how many Snapefans haven\'t entertained almost exactly this fantasy, anyway? Snape... here... in the rain... dripping wet... mmmm. *evil grin*

About your mastery of smut there can be no question. Post more lest I go mad!