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Hello

Um i enjoy your story very much and hope you would continue the story as i am dazzeld by the idea you plan for this story. If not i wish to have your permission to continue it if its not a problem with you? Im sure i can respect the rules and the futur of the storys as i put some of my own ideas in it. Of course if you had plan the story would end a certain way please tell me ill be glad to put it instead of mine. I would respect your wishes. I hope sincerly you leave me a chance and hold me up to my wishes.

Thank you for your time.


sincery: tina

I must say that this is one of the most interesting takes that I have seen in the fanfic gallery. It would be nice if you could go further with it. I was intrigued with the Muggle World from the wizard's point of view. Hermione expressed the same point when she took Muggle Studies at Hogwarts. I would guess that JKR was leading us to a greater involvement of the magical world in the affairs of Muggles. The first chapter of HBP is very suggestive of that course. If I were the most powerful evil wizard would I be satisfied with wreaking havoc in the wizarding world alone? Not when I realize how much evil mischief I could cause in the Muggle World.

Aww, not going to finish? That is too bad, I was quite enjoying this. There\'s just about nothing I like more than a good \"fish out of water\" story, and they are rather hard to find(the good part at least). I really hope you get back into writing soon. Also, picking up some anti-love for Lucius? I can\'t blame ya, but he is dead sexy =o

I read your story and enjoyed it... just thought i would review incase you ever felt like updating. x

I love it...that was the first Snape fic that I found...erm...fully satisfying and living up to the Snape I picture.

MORE ...PLEASE!!!

This story is just bloody brilliant so far! You have Snape\'s personallity in just the perfect way! Oh my gosh, and you capture all of the dead hard truethes that he would come up with! I have never, ever ever ever read a Snape fic that captures a foul side of him so well (I\'m just on the first chapter still :P )

Nice.

Hi! Interesting ideas. I would think the girls would be a little more curious about fact and fiction with Severus. I would be VERY curious as to what was true in his universe. You have him down pretty well, but he can come across a little whiney. I think a young Severus would be more like that. Also, give poor Amanda a little more private time with him. Also, what if they stop in a new age/head shop while they are out and about? His knowledge would be interesting, and not just \"all this is ridculous!\" I like your different food choices and as I am from a part of the country (usa) that does not have cheese curds, by the way I love them, yum!, it was funny to read about them. I look forward to the next chapter.

This is great. I can\'t believe I haven\'t seen this one before. Love it.

I\'m reviewing after chap 9. (I don\'t have time to read both)
Great chapter. Funny as hell.

This story is so good the one
suggestion I would make is that you change the summary
to reflect more about the story. \'Two fan fiction writers make
a wish to have Snape in their bed. What will they do with him
when their wish comes true...or something of the sort. I think
alot more people would read it.

As for reviews, AFF readers just don\'t do that a whole lot. Most
of them anyway.

\'Google search,\' that was good.

It wouldn\'t surprise Snape if Harry and Draco were gay...*laughs*

\'Stop being such a drama queen\' loved it.

Oh but the ending...Luscious Lucius...can\'t wait to get into the
next chapter. Keep it up..I\'m loving it..Lol