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for A Winter Tale

by Bylle

person Mary Snape
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh joy!! a couple of chapters every day.. with each one of them i like the story even more. great job. but one thing makes me really sad- i don\'t want Albus to die and Hermione to become a widow, that would break my heart!
person dryade
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great first chapter. read tons of marriage fics but this really got my attention. what a twist! i\'m so curious to see how you continue this,
person Mary Snape
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I love your story soooo much!!! please please update soon
person alibarbara
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The way you took a allready quite abustorytory challenge and a couple that is really not easy to make not sound sqicky is incredibly fantasic. The story is very refreshing. Your character discriptions are wonderful and I absolutely love that you update so often. Plese keep up the good work.
person redsugg
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter i absolutely love it. i just have one question for you will AD ans HG have sex while he is his normal self.

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kristle
person Mary Snape
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another chapter in only a few hours.. it\'s my lucky day ;) any chance for another one any time soon?
great chapter!!
person bagheera
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! Quite angsty, but understandably so. Also the first marriage challenge story that got me to read it :D What I especially like about it is the fact that Dumbledore will die / think he\'ll die. It gives it that air of ... melancholy and tragedy...
By the way... as you\'re not a native speaker, are you German? Some of your mistakes sound quite like mine ;P Keep it on!
person Digger
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, the first time I read through I was disturbed. Then I read iain,ain, holding the image of the young richard harris in my head... and it all made perfect sense to me! (not least because he was wicked-hot)

Beautifully written and wholly refreshing.
person Anonymous Russian
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They are not uskauska dolls dear but Mastranka. Babyuska is the russian word for grandmother. If you are going to use something from another culture at least use it right.
person redsugg
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story the best i have read so far and i hope that you update very very soon i can\'t wait to see what else will happen if you ever need a beta reader i would be more than happy to help you.

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kristle