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for A Winter Tale

by Bylle

person Li
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I would like this pairing, but you proved me wrong, itso wso well written and realistic......... keep up the good work!
person Li
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I never thought I would like this pairing, but you proved me wrong, it\'s so well written and realistic......... keep up the good work!
person Mary Snape
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
absolutely lovely chapter.. oh i so want Hermione to have a kid. My heart still aches from the thought of her becoming a widow

:)
person Claribel
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens! Please, please, if it\'s not too late (I know you\'ve written many chapters ahead), don\'t let Hermione get measles whilst pregnant. Too much tragedy, dear Max, you\'d make me weep! Feel so sad about the thought that Albus will die, and sadder still at how it must feel to bring a child into being but knowing that you would never see it born. Still, I must stop predicting what will happen, and wait to read your next chapter. Still a lovely story - thank you.

person Paprika
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is truly amazing. I would never usually be into this pairing, but something drew me to this story. I love that you constantly update, i love the fact that your chapters are huge. I\'ve read a lot of fanfiction, and i can easily sais iis is one of the best stories. I hope that once you are finished this story you will continue to write more stories. Looking forward to your next update, Paprika.
person Lucyferina
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, 3 chapters all for me to read :) thanks and update soon!!! as usual i\ookeooked to your story :)))
person snapes whore
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that this last chapter has improved a lot in terms of grammar you must have found a good beta reader good for you by the way great story please continue.
person Lucyferina
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
still me, i found your story here and i read the chapters that you still have to publish on the other side :) they are really good, i like the idea of Hermione as a swan, still a bit disturbed by the age-gap, i understand that love is \'blind\' and there are lots of different loves out there but still... 150 years are quite a lot... another thing, a question Hermione seems fond of Severus, now i know that Albus tolde her that he won\'t be there for her, to see her a \'woman\', are you planning to put them together at the end? i mean sev and herms? well, sorry, you mst be tired of my reviews :) i promise i won\'t annoy you for a while... until the next chapter :))))
person Uli
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I\'ve started reading the day you started posting and I have to admit I\'m hooked. I mean I read a few Hermione/Albus fics before but they were all done very poorly. You managed to portray their relationship with all the problems and ups and downs very well and most important believable.
It is also awesome that you post that often...great that one doesn\'t have to wait long to know what will happen, though I have to admit I would gladly wait as long as neccessary for an update.
Well thanks for writing, Uli
person Mary Snape
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I knew she would end up as a swan!!! great chapters :) It\'s pure bliss to have new chapters every day. keep up the wonderful job