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I am impressed. The language was much better and the way you sped the time line up was perfect. I cnat wait to read more.

interesting chapters!!! well i must admit that the kiss btw sev and herms was i d i don\'t know ... i mean i like them better than herm/albus but it didn\'t feel right, knowing that he was still alive, let\'s say that i noticed how much hermione thinks and talks about severus, and it really makes you aware that there is a strong connection btw the two, and still what herms and albus got it\'s too beautiful to be spoiled with her wanting someone else, it\'s good that she broke the kiss by saying that she loves albus and i understand that they were both \'emotionally\' on a rollercoaster ... thinking about albus and the vampires... so i guess it has to start somewhere btw them but still please no more herms/severus until after ablus (or at least that\'s what i hope) but i like your story no matter the direction you will take, just one question: have you already written it all? just wondering :) well keep up the good work, sorry about the length but i really like thinking and talking about your story :)

I really love this story. It\'s sad to think that Albus will die in the end. But I can see his not wanting to let Harry die.
The thought of another story about HG & AD sounds great. Are all your stories on AFF? If not, let me know where they are. Want to read more of your fabulous writing.
More of this great story soon please.

I really liked the light, happy mood of this chapter. It left me so happy :)

I have really enjoyed this story so far. Think you\'ve done a great job writting it. It seems to me that Albus is pushing Sev/Her together. Maybe Albus wants them together when he is gone?? Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Great chapter. And what was that kiss at the end? I read the paragraph several s bus but pretty tired right now. She did kiss him didn\'t she? More soon please, I need to know what I read...what you meant.

Great chapter. And what was that kiss at the end? I read the paragraph several times but pretty tired right now. She did kiss him didn\'t she? More soon please, I need to know what I read...what you meant.

very interesting new cjapters, i like how you develop the relationship btw sev and herms and how much they love albus, i\'m going to miss him too :(
well keep up the good job :) can\'t wait for more :)))

Great story i really love it but i think it is really sad that dumbledore will die can\'t you find a way for him to live or at least get to see his baby before he dies

Brilliant chapters...I really like the way everything goes so far. And it warms my heart to see Sevvie so out of charachter. It suits him :)

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