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for A Winter Tale

by Bylle

person anonymous
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really good story!! I loved reading it!!
person lucyferina
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, i\'m still thinking about severus and hermione together... it may be stupid but it still feels like it\'s too soon... i don\'t know if i make any sense but i feel like \'we\' have lost albus just 2 chapters back there and now... i don\'t know, i still trust you with the story.... update soon... i will still think and ponder ...
person azulkan2
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story. Now that Hermione has finally made up her mind and Severus as been brought around. I think Leon will be delighted as well.
I love the fact that you update so regularly. I don\'t think I could wait any longer for more. I can\'t wait to get home and turn on the computer to see if t is is a new chapter.
Great work, thanks for your time and of course, waiting for the next delicious tidbit.
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please do the next bit?
person olka-polka
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. Nice plot and good language...
Do hope it\'ll become HG/SS. ke tke them together best :)
person olka-polka
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...and ch. 23 was great...Harry, Severus\'s letter and so on...
UPDATE please
person Innogen
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! I\'ve been following this story for a while....I really want HG/D and Sev to get together. Oh, and Vasectemies can be reversed as long as you don\'t wait for longer than 8 to 10 years....so Sev\'s excuse for not marrying Hermione was weak at the time...*IF* he actually ever had one. Also...it takes a long time before semon is ceased to be made...it just sort of ...uhm...collects. Sometime needle extractrions are done when one wants to get pregnent again. I\'m sure Harry, as a mediwizard, would be *happy* to perform the minor procedure on Sev to make his best friend happy HEE HEE HEE!

Okay, your story. You already probabaly have it all written out though.....

Innogen
person lucyferina
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, i\'m thinking about thichapchapters, i\'m sorry that albus is gone... and i think you cut out a big chunk by not describing in depth the last battle, it\'s good that you\'re not hurring sev and herms, i like the idea of them going around and realising that what they want is just under their nose... update soon i shall wait and ponder :)
person Mary Snape
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sob*sigh*

don\'t get me wrong, especialy when I can\'t express myself exactly as I want to, but I don\'t think I\'m able to go on with your story. until the 21st chapter I was sure Albus\' death will be the thing that would break my heart. I was so wrong. I was ready to face his death, his only true love becoming a widow and even then, all sad and heartbroken, I would probably say it\'s one of my favourite stories. but I was NOT ready to face something like this. the fact that Hermione CHEATED on him was the thing that truelly broken my heart.. five minutes ago I was crying! and again, don\'t get me wrong- I LOVED your story until the 21st chapter and I thank you for writing something that made me feel so much.
I don\'t belive someone, anyone can love more then one person. romanticaly ofcourse. throughout the story you told the readers about their uniqe and amazing love which overcomes EVERYTHING and all of a sudden she\'s cheating on him? and trying to convince him that she still loves him?!
maybe I understod the whole point of the story wrong...
I wont tell you how to do your job, you are very good at it without gettingtatitations from readers like me so I guess I just tell you that I will think about this subject again in a normal hour and not at 03:53 PM but i\'m not sure I will be able to go on reading. I\'m sorry, I realy am. my heart is more broken now then if Severus Snape which I love for 5 years and Albus himself would die in the end of the story.

hmm, but thanx for chapters 1-20. Only you know how much I loved them.
person Alyssa
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Don\'t do this! I had just gotten used to the Hermione/Albus pairing!!!

I started out looking at this fic thinking \"Yay, another Hermione/Severus fic! My favorite!\" Then reading along, I realize that it WASN\'T a HG/SS fic and I was about to turn around from the seemingly \"icky\" factor, but I read on. I am SO glad I did! You changed my mind about this pairing and you are a WONDERFUL writer! I don\'t even want Hermione to end up with Severus anymore and hope that she and Albus would live happily ever after!

Well, anyway, WONDERFUL fic, WONDERFUL work, and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up the HG/AD pairing! There arent\' enough of them and your work is one of the rarest jems there are!