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i always knew i liked that ginny girl. shes very smart. and here we were thinking hermione had all the answers. lol

ooooooooooooooooh, a swan! how elegant. heehee, wasnt that cho\'s animagus form? oh, she\'ll be mad when she finds out wont she? lol. ok, well, continuing to read now.

a duck? that so cute! but her patronus form was abeaver. i always thought that had something to do with it. meh, oh well, its your story. a duck...so cute!

kyrie eleison!!!!!!!!!!! dude, thats awesome that you mentioned that song! im a choir nerd so i read that, then gloria and i was like eeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!! ya, i started singing. sorry, i just had to comment on that. im going to continue reading now. (by the way, just out of curiosity, what nationality are you? i remember you saying english wasnt your first language. so i was just wondering for curiositie\'s sake)

ok, im thoroughly disgusted, but at the same time, positively intrigued. this is really kind of a sick plot line, but im glad that you are actually ackknowlodging that fact within the story. it still is a good story overall though, and i will continue, in spite of my own best interests, to read it.

well i just finished chapter 2 and i gotta tell ya its a bit twisted. But there is something about it that pulls you in makes you want to finish reading the story.

Wonderfull story, but you made me cry when you wrote of Albus\'s death. I knew it was comming, but at least he got to see his child before he left.

Lee Swain

this is a beyond outstanding story it is deff. one of my favorites! you are a great write so please dont stop!thanks!

I'm sorry, but this whole story's premise is really fucking disgusting. I was just reading the first chapter, and enjoying your descriptive writing, as well as the many literary technics you utilized, but when reading that she had to marry Dumbledore, at first I thought I might throw up. Well, my second reaction was to skip between the chapters to see if you were joking or not. But then I realized that she really had to marry Dumbldore, and you came up with the idea what she actually ended up loving him. Allright, I read a lot of fanfiction stories, and this has got to be the worst idea I've ever read. Seriously, your writing skills were wasted on this story. Getting excited about snape and hermione is one thing, but hermione and Albus Dumbledore? That creates a very opposite reaction, one that involves regurgitating much of my lunch. Please do not post this filth anywhere else, because I think I just wasted my $5.00 on that burrito today.

What a great story! Beautiful plot!

Jen