rate_review Reviews

I can't tell you enough how much I'm loving this story. I very rarely even read het, let alone something like Hermione/Dumbledore, so when I first read the description, I jaw was at my knees. You've definately changed my mind though. Though I'm only on chapter 4, I couldn't resist leaving you a positive review about your beautiful writing.

You noted in ch. 3 that you were in need of a beta, and though you've already posted the last chapter, I wanted to let you know that I'd be more than happy to edit it for you if you'd like. I know that English isn't your native tongue, but the story is a little tough for English-speakers to make out in some places. The minor gramatical changes would make your story absolutely perfect, because you already have a superbly beautiful story.

Let me know if you're interested in a beta.

i never thought i would like a hermione albus story but
this is really good and it took me only 2 days to read it completly :-)
i hope i will find more stories so good written
sorry when my writing is not so good i

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

i'm usually not a fan of Dumbledore/Hermione pairings, but this was so fantastically written, that I couldn't help but be! I also loved the story for the vampires as well, what an idea, having them in a Parisian brothel!

I'd love to be able to write a story off of that, about Le Conte and his brothel. May I have your permission to do so? ^_^

i like your story but all the messed up words make it hard to follow. you should not have put a story up with that many typos its almost un-readable.

I am still crying...such a wonderful story...*sniff but a happy ending...even if Dumbledore had to die.

I loved this story...it was very well writen...thanks for writing it.

I would feel honored to give you the amount of praise this story deserves. But I doubt there are enough praises to give it what it is due. This was beautifully written and has more than once brought me to tears. The careful thought and meticulous imagery made me almost late to work two days in a row so that I could attempt to drink more in. Thank you for the escape from reality through this marvelous piece of art.

awwwww....its over. *tear* that was a great story, i think its the only dumbledore/hermione fic i will ever be able to enjoy, at least, i wont be able to enjoy others as much as this one. well, happy endings are always great, and this one is no exception. im kinda sad its over, but im sure i will be able to live on...eventually. lol. well, best of luck and i hope i will be able to find some more works of yours in the future.

that was hot! the key is to picture the same basic severus from the movies, but, well, you described him pretty well:less greasy and sallow-skinned, so he looks a hell of a lot better. ya, that was a good chapter, cant wait to continue reading