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for Invisible

by SnapesDream

schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*sighs*

Lovely, they are just so perfect together *sighs*

Wonderful written, though i could have done with some fluff afterwards ;)

Jocy
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! ::whining:: I WANT a Phantom Lover too!!!!!
;-D
schedule August 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I don't know how I missed this one. I loved it!

Tiffany
person Anon
schedule July 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nicely written cherrytree! Doesn't it make you want to become a frizzy haired bookworm?! lol write more!
person ~*~Tasha~*~
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Steamy ... awesome!
person Mandy
schedule June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. But what exactly did he come there to do. I mean I can understand wanting to be invisible, traversing to her rooms and all, not wanting to be seen. But how did he get into her room, Hermione doesn't strike me as the type of witch to just leave her rooms unlocked and open for anyone, especially not while she's in bed masturbating. No matter, it was a cute little ficlett. I enjoyed it. I rather liked the dress myself, though I wish you had given a bit more of a description. It gets a little too lovey/mushy at the end. It was sex, they were frustrated, but I'm getting the impressiong that it was like "aww yay I found someone" kinda feeling from either party. That to me, in this sort of story, was built up too quickly. But again, good job on your cute little story.
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person spaz141
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks.
person ancientgirl
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Have you thought of maybe a short sequal?