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by OlympiaManet2003

person LadyFlashB
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*swipes tear from corner of eye* Oh... that was... B R I L L I A N T ! ! ! I love it, the whole perspective thing. For some reason I kept hearing John Cleese\'s voice as Voldemort, from a scene from \"Eric the Viking\". *stares wildly at the pc screen, imagining how further you can take this* With a BIG sh*t-eating grin on my face, still wiping at tears... I hope, I hope, I hope you continue!
person Anon
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Lord. The Death Eaters are charming! Voldemort is a reasonable chap! Slytherins aren\'t just a bunch of posh psychopaths!

I always suspected Rowling was being slightly biased in this respect... ;)

Great story, great style. May we have more? Please?
person KarenDetroit
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it\'s kinky. Well-written, and a very different, interesting point of view. That\'s a good thing--there are too many inferior soap operadicedice ripper fics out there. I will be thinking about this for a long time, to be sure.
person dana
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
interesting new look to the spying role and very funny too, i hope u continue with this story it looks very promising.
person Snapeaholic
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! This was fantastically hilarious! Please, please, please update soon! You did a wonderful job of making fun of all the Death Eater stereotypes/conjectures that run rampant in fanfiction. Congrats! I can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person cherry
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
god i love you! sheez, you\'re fuckin\' brilliant! I love, absolutely LOVE the story so far so don\'t you DARE stop writing and please, PLEASE update soon!!!
person Laanckanckir
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL That was absolutely brilliant! I read the death eaters discussion thing, and you sure put a completetly different (and somewhat hilarious) view to it. Very clever. Your writing is great!
person morgana
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
bravo bravo very very very funny. good grief how did you get that funny
person azulkan2
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just neat. Is that all there is or do you plan more with Sev actually trying to get Hermione to become a deatheater? Could make for a very interesting story. Moren?!?n?!?
person karabdai
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this!!! I really like the baking Bella and the Lemon drop Voldie. And Severus asking for the crucio was too funny. This is a great idea and I really can\'t wait to see what you do with this. Great job!!!