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by OlympiaManet2003

person Jo F.
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a hoot!

Lemon Drops, ventilation systems, Bella catering tea, what more could you ask for?

Um, another chapter soon is the only thing I can think of!

More, soon, please?

Jo
person nimcra
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hilarious, absolutely hilarious. i\'ll be waiting to see where this fic goes. the death eaters as a political movement who\'d have thunk it.
person RavenX
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehe...this fic is quite deliciously hilarious. I love your dry humor. The periwinkle vs. black robes bit had me laughing so hard that my roomates think I\'ve gone completely nutters. Thanks. :)

I hope to see more story soon.
person gill
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was so funny! It should come with a spew warning...
person Sohara
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? Brilliant comes to mind but it doesn\'t really do justice to what your story actually is.
It\'s beyond brilliant and extremely funny. I had to do a double take when Snape remarked about the lemon drops in the beginning of the story. :D
I am happy that I read this story as I almost passed it by. Btw what does the title mean ?
Did i say anything about updates? More of them please and soon.

Cheers!!
Sohara
person Kris Adrian
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story and was recommended to me by a friend, but you need to have it proof-read by someone who knows the rules about punctuation and capitalization after dialogue.

For example:

person Deeble
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very funny. Snape\'s attempt to be charming by only taking 20 points off Gryffindor is just one of the things that made me laugh out loud.
person Avery
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely brilliant! The dialogue is fantastic - I can actually hear it in my head. Funny as hell, too. More more more!
person azulkan2
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the funniest stories I have ever read. This chapter is great. Now I have to wonder why Severus is supposed to talk to Hermione? And the \"dark lord\", I love him. Can\'t wait for more of this great fic.
person otherside
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay theres more! I love, love, love this story! smashing cliche\'s right and left. voldemort bringing \"warm fuzzieshrouhrough the ducts, and i particuly like snape\'s rows of pristine white boxers :P