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Strange... Does Hermione change in the near future? Please!

lots-a-luvies,

Squish

I see the build of plot, which is good, but I am confused by a few points. One being Voldemort referring to Hermione as \'My Darkness\'. Is that his pet name for her? And the other thing that I need clarification on is whether it is Hermione as his \'darkness\' or is she possessed? I hope to see more. I left another review a few minutes ago but it didn\'t go through. I hate when that happens, so I had to try again. But I have a feeling that this one isn\'t as the same, but it still addresses the different points of my overall review. The formatting of your recent post was hard to read, but I\'m sure you already know that and are trying to fix it. It happens all thee~)me. Don\'t be discouraged by people not rwingwing. Some people don\'t really read or review a story until it has had a few chapters already posted because so many authors post one chapter and abandon the fic. I will keep reviewing as I see you post to help keep up your morale;)

elementaldeity

This is interesting, you have left a lot of clues as to what has happened as well as what could happen. I am interested in seeing where it will lead.

elementaldeity