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I love the name for chapter five.

bring a torch, jeannette isabella, bring a torch, come swiftly and run... gah!! bloody choir.... i even remember the harmonies. If you have ANY clue what I\'m talking about, please let me know! :) also, you write well. that was the other reason for reviewing.

hey, do update! cant wait to read the rest of this story...its a nice change from the typical reply of the marriage law challenge!! consider me a fan with wat u have so far [=

Is it really necessary to create a Mary-Sue when there are so many canon characters who could be paired with Draco more plausibly? Nice self-insert.

To curosity:

To Curiosity:

One of the rules in this challenge is that no cannon female characters be the main focus. Also, Mary Sues are allowed and even encouraged to an extent. I know that Mary Sue is not considered \"cool\" but i don\'t really care. I want my writers to have full creative freedom and I think the cannon characters have been done to death.

Sorry, Curiosity. An original character is not immediately a \"Mary Sue.\" I am not Isabelle, and she is certainly not me. I\'m curiomysemyself, why you assumed she was. I am using proper grammar and spelling, I am not using huge amounts of flattering description of her (she isn\'t beautiful, she\'s on the thin side, and she\'s more than a bit naive ... would you have chosen to tell Draco Malfoy he\'s stupid? Not me), and I\'m not having her beloved by the whole school.

Please tell me what criteria you used for this determination, as Isabelle does not meet the above at least, and those are defining issues for calling a character a Mary Sue. Thanks!

a very interesting concept here. you definitely don\'t see many marriage fics involving draco. the fact that you have his character down is wonderful. when he first entered the common room and took his seat, making the second yeaurryurry away was spot on. even when he apologized to isabelle was good. his hesitancy at even using the word \"apologize\" was good. it\'s hard to see draco lowering himself to be humble for any reason. isabelle\'s laughter might have been a bit much. yes she should have laughed, but only for a short time. then maybe dawning horror that he was seriothatthat would have been good. anyway, i look forward to more.

Finally!!!! I have long wanted to read a marriage challenge w/Draco. I planned on doing one myself. This is great! I can\'t wait to read more. Please post asap.

This is a very interesting twist and I would love to read more of this. Update soon!

Another good chapter. I was happily surprised to see Ginny called by her correct first name. I didn\'t even know that until i went to JK\'s site and read it there.