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person catdog
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
when will you continue your story I love the story and would to see it finished.
person SpoonNinja
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE!!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH I NEED MORE!!! That had to be one of the best detentions EVER! lol
person Anon
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is good i like the plot
person nz
schedule May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please more. I love it
person julie
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I really enjoy the start of this fic and I was wondering if you were ever going to continue it. Tx.
person Phoenix 5
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update sooooonnnnn
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg that was sooo good. Please update. \'he was only four inch long when he was hard. \' gods that was bloody hysterical! I swear i .... ooh gosh it was so funny. lol.
Very sad though, poor dude, 4 inches.
- Jessica
person Shivawn (not signed in)
schedule February 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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FFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG, update soon please? ::squee:: I love where this is going! Great story! How are you so imaginative? ::blinks::

One thing; you switch from past and present tense a lot...like \'were\' should be \'was\' or something.

Love the story! Update soon!
person Mary
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why don\'t you continue?
I know, that you have already something *hopes just, but that doesn\'t matter* ;)
please, write more :)

Mary
person Silver
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! I hope you write more soon!